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Shine On

‘For all that you are, and all that you do a soldier my salute to you’ the Indian Army(quote) My thoughts surf on a shiny wave I look beyond an ocean maze The sun dips into twilights cave The moon shines like a shield To protect all who are brave A shimmering silver mirror An ocean and lights dancing twirl Two magnets my eyes are drawn To the dark filled with shining stars An unshed tear shines with a brimming haze Sitting silently upon my gaze. 9.4.2021 Sponsor: Constance La France Writing Prompt: Shine.

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Date: 4/22/2021 4:13:00 PM
Carol, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with this Free Verse poem, well done, and I like your quote also, love _Constance
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Date: 4/11/2021 8:21:00 AM
Nice piece Carol, fine penning with good expression too. Blessings, Gordon
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/11/2021 9:37:00 PM
Thank you dear Gordon...Take care :)
Date: 4/9/2021 12:35:00 PM
Hello Carol Mitra, i am rooting for you in the contest. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/10/2021 11:23:00 AM
Hello Carol Mitra,you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day .
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/9/2021 5:59:00 PM
Hi Darlene dear.....thank you much love...Take care :)
Date: 4/9/2021 8:43:00 AM
Hi Carol, You've penned a good entry for the “shine” contest. Good imagery and content. Best wishes in the in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/9/2021 9:13:00 AM
Thanks dear Alexis...much love...Take care :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/9/2021 9:12:00 AM
Thanks dear Alexis...much love...Take care :)
Date: 4/9/2021 7:08:00 AM
Such a wonderful write, Carol,reminded me of my husband. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Carol Mitra
Date: 4/9/2021 9:07:00 AM
Thanks dear Eve...A salute to your husband....Brave hearts.

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