V. Deepa Poet Free verse

Shimmering River

Spills out of bed 
that shared intimacy
seems slinky naked 
lavishly strokes rocks on her route
Magnifying her outstretched whimsical body
Jiggled eyes refuses to shun
Hedges blush with sprinkled 
pearls of raptured tears
Her burbles tickles hormones 
of weeping willows too.
Climaxing coast craves.

5-6-2020

~DEEPA~

6th place in the Contest.
Note1:Some kind of Sensual poetry Contest
Theme:River
Title: Shimmering River
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud
45 words used~(checked with Words counter.com)

Third place in the Contest.
Note2:BRIAN'S SELECT 9,any form,any theme
Sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 9:29 AM Wow! You took the river theme to portray it so beautifully. This is sensuous at its best Deepa. So glad it is a winner. Congratulations! Much love :) V. Deepa June 9, 2020 at 1:27 AM Thankyou mam for the beautiful words of appraisal.I am glad too. Good luck for your other works. Take care Mam.Warm regards~Deepa

Mohan Chutani June 6, 2020 at 6:26 AM Deepa, just what Nette would like. A lovely write on the topic using River. Best. Mohan V. Deepa June 7, 2020 at 1:07 AM Hello Sir, Thanks a lot for your warm wishes and appreciation Sir. :-) Let me hope for it now;-) My best wishes for your works too:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa.