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Shimmering River

Spills out of bed that shared intimacy seems slinky naked lavishly strokes rocks on her route Magnifying her outstretched whimsical body Jiggled eyes refuses to shun Hedges blush with sprinkled pearls of raptured tears Her burbles tickles hormones of weeping willows too. Climaxing coast craves. 5-6-2020 ~DEEPA~ 6th place in the Contest. Note1:Some kind of Sensual poetry Contest Theme:River Title: Shimmering River Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 45 words used~(checked with Words counter.com) Third place in the Contest. Note2:BRIAN'S SELECT 9,any form,any theme Sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/8/2020 9:29:00 AM

Wow! You took the river theme to portray it so beautifully. This is sensuous at its best Deepa. So glad it is a winner. Congratulations! Much love :)

V. Deepa
Date: 6/9/2020 1:27:00 AM

Thankyou mam for the beautiful words of appraisal.I am glad too. Good luck for your other works. Take care Mam.Warm regards~Deepa

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/6/2020 6:26:00 AM

Deepa, just what Nette would like. A lovely write on the topic using River. Best. Mohan

V. Deepa
Date: 6/7/2020 1:07:00 AM

Hello Sir, Thanks a lot for your warm wishes and appreciation Sir. :-) Let me hope for it now;-) My best wishes for your works too:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa.