Shimmering Glow

Candle shimmering with a glow,
Burning so bright and very slow.
A rainbow of light so bright,
I am dreaming of this night.
A rendezvous for two might,
Lead to a romance tonight.
Candle shimmering with a glow,
Burning so bright and very slow.
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Seeker Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:57 PM
So romantic and brimming with vibrance!
Toney Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 9:45 AM
Thank you for supporting my Flash Poetry Challenge, Lise. Your poem was randomly chosen to feature in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. I enjoyed your romantic poem filled with shimmering anticipation.
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November 22, 2024 at 9:53 AM
Thank you, Mark!
Woods Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Oooo romantic! Lovely imagery...xo
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November 21, 2024 at 5:11 PM
Thank you, Crystol!
Rolland Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 6:42 PM
very lovely poem, which creates an affective atmosphere, enjoyed yann
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November 21, 2024 at 5:11 PM
Thank you, Yann!
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