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Shimmering Glow

Candle shimmering with a glow, Burning so bright and very slow. A rainbow of light so bright, I am dreaming of this night. A rendezvous for two might, Lead to a romance tonight. Candle shimmering with a glow, Burning so bright and very slow.

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Date: 11/22/2024 5:57:00 PM
So romantic and brimming with vibrance!
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Date: 11/22/2024 9:45:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my Flash Poetry Challenge, Lise. Your poem was randomly chosen to feature in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. I enjoyed your romantic poem filled with shimmering anticipation.
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Lise Clendening
Date: 11/22/2024 9:53:00 AM
Thank you, Mark!
Date: 11/21/2024 11:03:00 AM
Oooo romantic! Lovely imagery...xo
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Lise Clendening
Date: 11/21/2024 5:11:00 PM
Thank you, Crystol!
Date: 11/20/2024 6:42:00 PM
very lovely poem, which creates an affective atmosphere, enjoyed yann
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Lise Clendening
Date: 11/21/2024 5:11:00 PM
Thank you, Yann!

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