Shhhhhhhooosh Ma's Sleeee Eep? Ing?

There was a fine marm from Bushing
who bare bottomed, pushed into a cushion
while half asleep
her children in creep
and woke her with all of their shooshing!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Deb in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol
Flaherty Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Hi Deborah Cute i like it , For all your help and your words You inspired a Poem i wrote , Hope you like It is called the Anointed Harmony Sender. Cheers
Sweetheart Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 9:39 AM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in John's contest.. with this original and unique creative write.. lets go have our victory dance shall we? with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 10:01 PM
Congratulations, Deb, on your fine limerick!! Luv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:40 PM
Congratulations Deborah on your Limerick in a fun contest. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:28 PM
I remember how silent those little ones could not be. Very funny. Love, Joyce
Culverhouse Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 4:46 PM
witty one!!
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 12:15 PM
I am loving this Limerick. Someday I will write one of these. I love reading them just haven't had the urge to write one yet. You have Soupy mail Deb. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 6:16 AM
Interesting Limerick that you have penned in this one...Sara
Flanders Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 5:49 AM
The title says it all...and the rest explained it perfectly! Enjoyed, cheers.
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