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She's Too Far Gone

She’s too far gone, away from me and what was to be. All the many moments that glimmered gold and ran free Through the beginning of a beautiful bond begun In the café that Tuesday with a simple smile that spun My worn out world upside down. I had coffee she had tea. Eventually, the stars slid through her hourglass and she Grew tired of the toiling and holding on to a dream of me, More mature—more sane. I wonder if anything can be done; She’s too far gone To even listen to the desperate desperation in my plea To commandeer change, in a heart willing to make her see That we had it all and understand the love still left undone. Apologies! To the empty promises always kept—you never won! A fight about fate, our future—anything! Now I see, and must agree; She’s too far gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/18/2013 10:35:00 PM
Mike, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT
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Date: 7/14/2013 6:14:00 PM
awesome poem. SandyIvy
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Date: 7/14/2013 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations, a fine piece.
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Date: 7/14/2013 1:41:00 AM
wow, I love your style. THis is fantastic, Mike. Glad to see it on the winners list.
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Date: 7/13/2013 11:57:00 PM
Yes, Mike, with the most catchy title in my Contest... this is a great poem... :-( sadly it's not from my winners circle. however, .. :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 2/16/2010 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations Mike, on your success in Brian’s “A RONDEL” contest with this realistic and very believable poem. It's easy to see why you placed FIRST! Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mike. blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/10/2010 7:54:00 AM
Just to say Mike I airmailed your prixe this afternoon.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 2/5/2010 1:30:00 AM
Congratulations Mike, a well written poem, a pleasure to read.....Margaret
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Date: 2/4/2010 12:58:00 PM
Very nice! Congratulations on your big win! andrea
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Date: 2/4/2010 10:21:00 AM
Mike , clever / well crafted piece and congrats on a well deserved win ....
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win in Brians contest Mike. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/4/2010 7:39:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Mike.Rgds Brian.My latest contest SPACES is now open.If you care to Soupmail with a forwarding address I'll airmail your prize.
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Date: 1/28/2010 11:43:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Mike.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/28/2010 10:11:00 AM
A top notch desperate. desperation Mike. Congratulatons, you did it. Sincerely, Moses
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