David Fisher Poet Free verse

She's Magic

As I timidly stare at her
She pulls on my strings and knots them,
Making my smile permanent.
My words then come out tongue tied,
Though my desire is as sure
As her beauty.


For Micropoetry Contest

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Francis Osho January 11, 2016 at 2:31 AM i like it david

Judy Konos September 23, 2015 at 10:01 AM WOW.....

Joyce Johnson August 8, 2015 at 8:13 PM Brilliantly composed. Good luck. Thanks for your kind comments on my flag poem. Joyce

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2015 at 9:39 PM very sweet! I enjoyed seeing this one.

James Inman August 7, 2015 at 8:39 AM Lovely, sweet write.

Richard Lamoureux August 7, 2015 at 8:28 AM So romantic! Congrats.

Jan Allison August 7, 2015 at 4:41 AM this is so lovely congrats David:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley August 7, 2015 at 1:15 AM Lovely little write, David, well done. Regards, Viv

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 7, 2015 at 12:26 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning brilliant write David!A sure winner!

Pandita Sietesantos August 7, 2015 at 12:06 AM Congratulations on your win, David! Very beautiful romantic write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love! Pandita

Casarah Nance August 6, 2015 at 8:20 PM Aww this was super cute, super sweet and I loved it, but it went over the character count for a tweet :(