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She's Magic

As I timidly stare at her She pulls on my strings and knots them, Making my smile permanent. My words then come out tongue tied, Though my desire is as sure As her beauty. For Micropoetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/11/2016 2:31:00 AM
i like it david
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Date: 9/23/2015 10:01:00 AM
WOW.....
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Date: 8/8/2015 8:13:00 PM
Brilliantly composed. Good luck. Thanks for your kind comments on my flag poem. Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2015 9:39:00 PM
very sweet! I enjoyed seeing this one.
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Date: 8/7/2015 8:39:00 AM
Lovely, sweet write.
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Date: 8/7/2015 8:28:00 AM
So romantic! Congrats.
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Date: 8/7/2015 4:41:00 AM
this is so lovely congrats David:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:15:00 AM
Lovely little write, David, well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:26:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning brilliant write David!A sure winner!
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, David! Very beautiful romantic write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love! Pandita
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Date: 8/6/2015 8:20:00 PM
Aww this was super cute, super sweet and I loved it, but it went over the character count for a tweet :(
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