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She's Amazing

She's a paragon of feminine beauty and wit, and although she's only eight, she's a revelation; a source of pride and credit to her generation. I love my baby with all my heart; I can't help it. With youth's charisma and charm, her aura is blazing, and yet, I suffer anxiety watching her grow. The years are flashing by fast, and I wish time would slow and extend my dad-time with my girl. She's amazing! (Rhyme) 7/6/2018

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Date: 7/31/2018 9:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Beautiful!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/1/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/24/2018 2:27:00 PM
Hello Emile, is this your daughter? She is a beautiful girl. Children do grow up. Have a nice day my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/24/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, no this is not my daughter, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
Date: 7/6/2018 10:31:00 PM
A delightful and charming write. Tomorrow I will look for your books on Amazon!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2018 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Lyric Man, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/6/2018 1:31:00 PM
Sweet, Emile. Perfect title too.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/6/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/6/2018 12:44:00 PM
aww Emile what a charming poem, bought a tear to my eye:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/6/2018 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I always appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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