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Vanishing

vanishing options relationship gone sour ~ wishing to backtrack posted August 12, 2018

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/16/2018 9:38:00 PM

Wow ! Powerful.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/20/2018 3:56:00 PM

Its amazing how much pain people will live with for Love

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/16/2018 10:05:00 PM

It's wicked when people let relationships disintegrate to that degree.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/14/2018 9:30:00 AM

Gives me the chills. Hope it's not my wife! ~ gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/14/2018 4:24:00 PM

No, Gershon. Your wife says she is quite happy with you!

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/13/2018 5:30:00 PM

Wow.....this one packed a punch !! Hope it is just an expression of your gift and imagination !!! Well said!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2018 5:52:00 PM

I wish...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2018 3:23:00 PM

oh my, that is not good at all!! Well, Line. I wanted to thank you for viewing so many of my poems today and unfortunately, I can't repay you with lots of visits myself. I need to leave here shortly. I really love seeing your short forms . you are so gifted at them. I take forever to think things up for senryu or haiku but at least half of yours look effortless and brilliant!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2018 4:01:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/12/2018 10:06:00 PM

There is sour, and then there is SOUR. Wow!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 11:06:00 PM

Troubling - sad - the stuff nightmares are made of... on the other hand, I'm happy to report my husband and I are happy and celebrating our 10th anniversary in 2 weeks.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/12/2018 8:21:00 PM

Line, your senryu speaks volumes about a very sad state of affairs.. Well done! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 8:59:00 PM

Pretty sad state of affairs. Too bad people let it get to that extent.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/12/2018 6:08:00 PM

rough relationship.. nicely done senryu..Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 6:18:00 PM

It's sad to see relationships deteriorate to that extent. It takes two to make it work - sad to see people think they have no options.