Sheringham

A west wind turned the blackness into blue
as down the streets umbrellas packed away
bright sunshine washed the pavements and the cue
for all to step out and enjoy the day.
Old ladies picked their way down to the shore
the children squealed as cold waves slapped their knees
a dog licked spilt ice cream from off the floor
Kittiwake held station in the breeze.
We stood in the North sea, just feet apart
the stresses of the year now losing grip
holding hands like some childhood sweethearts
but with a walking stick in case she'd slip

To sum up, for a cure to all your woes
you cannot beat some sand between your toes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 3:40 AM
Beautiful sonnet Viv, you described it very well, there's something about the sea, because of working early hours years ago I'm up before the lark and quick coffee and I'm gone for a couple of hours. I never tire of seeing the sunrise and an empty beach. Tom
La France Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Viv, this is LOVELY and I am loving it 7 ~
Wigley Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 11:15 PM
Thanks, Constance, you're very kind. Hope you're well, Viv x
Smith Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 6:51 AM
In a nutshell. Nothing missing and nothing not needed. A poem well penned with minimal ink. Pleased this Kiwi. David from NZ
Wigley Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 7:13 AM
Cheers, Dave, glad you enjoyed it. Regards, Viv
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