Sheltering In Place

Home is where 
               She is under his gun






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Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Cox Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 9:59 AM
A home is where you should be safe, but the threat of under his gun? Is she abused by him or protected? Haunting. Dave C
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May 15, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Thank you so much Dave. This tortured my muse till I got it out. ~ Maureen
Krutsinger Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 6:56 AM
Oh wow! WOW!
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May 4, 2020 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Caren <3 <3
Boreham Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 10:03 AM
So Sharp... and *shivers* :O <3
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May 4, 2020 at 7:30 AM
Thank you Paris-Maree! xomo <3
Gentile Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 7:06 AM
I'm sure that could add nothing more to what has already been said but this one really hit me. Intense in its subtlety . Happy Friday Maureen xxoo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Thank you Mike! One of those possessed by my muse writes ;), Have a wonderful weekend, xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 6:13 PM
Wow! Nice twist on words!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Thank you Kim! I do love using preloaded word pairings ;), xomo hugs!
One Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 2:00 PM
Not a good place to be.... This situation is so messed up.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 5:01 PM
...fingers crossed for a social revolution, here anyway.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 5:00 PM
With business as usual all shuttered up, the dark unseen and un discussed is is in full view. x
Kendrick Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 10:41 AM
Well, this is not a pleasant thought but then the woman who is abused lives in constant unpleasantness. I wonder if we as Americans could do more to prevent it. Sara
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 12:35 PM
Thank you Sara. Up here in Canada, with the covid shut down, more money and resources are being put towards shelters and call centers, I hope they are doing the same in the US. Stay safe, warm hugs, xomo
Makama Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 10:34 PM
Damn! A dark and expressive message so vivid in a very few lines. Wonderfully expressed
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much Funom. When something crawls under my skin like this I am driven to find its most succinct expression. I only know I'm there when I feel the pressure release. Stay safe! Warm hugs, xomo
Deo Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Depends what's in the gun? It is loaded? With overcoming fragrance? shalom, shalom (Seriously, LOCKDOWN may be US Superbowl for abuse. So VIGILANCE)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 12:23 PM
A giggle and a bravo for that pithiness. Grey Cup up here ;), xomo!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 9:05 AM
I feel for women who are now isolated with their abusers. They used to have some relief when their husbands went to work. Very sad days for so many women.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Yup, sad, long, long days. I know I am lucky to have a gentle man for a partner. Thank you my friend, have a lovely day! xomo
Trifiatis Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Ouch! Poor girl. Let us disarm him! Very powerful! Hugs dearest, Maureen xxx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 8:42 AM
Thank you dear. Calls about domestic violence are down while the rates are rising: of course, she can't call for help when he is around. xomo <3
Krutsinger Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 6:02 AM
So true of so many; you need to write the opposite one now for the aggressive women of America and beyond. Snicker. Snicker.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Yup. No one knows the woes behind closed doors. And challenge accepted! Posting now... ;), xomo!
Faulkner Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 5:56 PM
A grim image, tense and tightly-wound...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Thank you Michelle. Hugs and stay safe, in every way. xomo
Bauer Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 4:55 PM
oh, so true in so many cases, maureen! this is brilliantly written...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 8:52 PM
Thank you so much Ilene. I sat with 'home is where...' for a while till I hammered this one out. Much hugs. xomo
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 2:27 PM
BANG! Ha, ha.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 8:47 PM
Bang, bang, you shot me down.
Leffanta Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Single shot, or automatic? Domestic abuse is on the rise! Nicely caught! Aloha! Rico
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April 28, 2020 at 8:49 PM
I think it starts as single shot, eventually it's automatic. x
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