Shells Started It

SHELLS STARTED IT

my brain is lackadaisical
it does not want to think
put words together
find a theme.

my eyes wander petulantly 
about the room like a lost bird
looking for a place to lite
a nest of soft moss to dream.

let my dreams do the work 
I choose the shells stacked in vases
my thoughts wash over them like the sea
they sing of poor drown sailors.

Dylon Thomas visits my thoughts
with Rosey Probert and the sea captain
blind, remembering her delights
naming those he left behind in Davy Jones

the shells carried me there 
into his poem Under Milk Wood
but all I see is the sea and the captain
hauled up on shore like an old boat.

they sing in tinkling 
sand scraping voices
the long dead shells shined 
between fingers trying to grab

the feeling of the sea
with gull skimming waves
and foam rumoured to be unicorns
trying to return at last to the green land.

my thoughts are moon-calf now
totally drawn away from my mind
sailing free beyond me, leaping through
the foam and blue of sky or sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/4/2017 10:02:00 AM
A great poem describing your flying muse, Patricia:)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/4/2017 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 12/4/2017 8:38:00 AM
That is a very deep last stanza... a reflective poem and you do these very well...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/4/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. I do have a shell collection dispersed around the cottage. I like to hold them and try to hear their stories.
Date: 12/3/2017 10:48:00 AM
Did you write this on the spot...if so very creative with a flow...All the best Patricia
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Date: 12/3/2017 12:03:00 PM
Which spot? lol Thank you Arturo.
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