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She'Ll Always Go On Believing

Sue doesn’t sit so demurely in her motorised wheelchair. She’ll tell folks to stop gawking as it's very rude to stare! Beneath her tenuous frame is quite a formidable young girl, born with brittle bones but in her wheelchair she can twirl. Sue’s parents sadly told her that her condition is immutable. She is bereft of strong limbs, but her courage is irrefutable. Despite a recent interlude in hospital, she's always cheerful. Don’t treat her like she’s invisible or you may get an earful! She loves to sketch caricatures in her artist’s drawing book and in her specially adapted kitchen Sue is learning to cook. Her physical disability will not prevent her from achieving and her aphorism of life's always been, ‘Never stop believing Sue loves to spend time wheeling around the garden paths, watching chirping sparrows joyfully splashing in bird baths. She paints canvases filled with butterflies and lovely flowers. Sometimes she is quite content to sit there and read for hours. If you are feeling sorry for Sue, don't give it another thought. In her scarlet wheelchair, she's accepted what life has wrought. Each day she finds something to appreciate that gives her a thrill. In truth, she sees more beauty in life than most of us ever will. Eight word Challenge 5 Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton Required words: demurely, sketch, tenuous, brittle, formidable, interlude, bereft, immutable 10-23-17
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Hamilton Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Very touching Jan, thanks for entering this beauty, congrats on a fine placement!
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Thanks so much for the placement in the contest John it was a real challenge to weave the words into the poem:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:44 AM
...and I never tire of reading about her courage. I know this one is close to your heart. Congratulations to you, Jan.
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 1:19 PM
Thanks so much Lin, there are some remarkable inspiring people out there who overcome their difficulties and set an example to us all - I will send you a link about a young Manx student from out school who is inspirational after overcoming horrendous health issues. hugs jan xx
Krampe Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 8:46 PM
Such an uplifting and encouraging poem, Jan. Good luck in the contest!
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 3:27 AM
Thanks Agnes, I've worked with students who are confined to wheelchairs and they are inspirational young people:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 8:06 AM
So sweet and encouraging, Jan. A message that needs repeating to really sink in, xxoo Good Luck!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 9:04 AM
Thanks Mike, we have a lot to be thankful for and can learn a great deal from others less able than ourselves:-) hugs jan xx
Gondolf Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 6:59 AM
Jan, such a beautiful, inspirational poem. Sometimes we tend to take things for granted, this reminds us we need to be thankful for what we have. Good luck in the contest!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 9:01 AM
I have worked with student's who are in wheelchair's and they were a joy to be with and never let their disability get in the way:-) hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 3:35 AM
Heart warming, well woven piece, Jan, will do well, I'm sure. Viv x
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Thanks so much Mr Viv, it's so good to see you back:-) Love to Janet and Celeste xx
Bauer Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 8:17 PM
very uplifting and beautifully written, jan! best of luck in the contest - it reads like a winner to me...
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Jan, this is a wonderful write! GL on contest! I expect you’ll be at the top!!
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 6:15 PM
I hope John likes it Kim, places in the contest are quite limited:-) hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 4:32 PM
This is a very beautiful sweet poem!
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Arthur - I hope Darren reads it I think he will be able to relate:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 4:02 PM
It's all about courage and attitude. Using the required eight words for such a worthwhile topic makes this one special, Jan.
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 4:40 PM
:-) xx
Lane Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Merci
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 4:05 PM
Thanks so much Lin, its a fictional poem for me but I have worked with children who are in wheelchairs and they are remarkable young people. There are many inspirational people around and you are one of them!:-) hugs jan xx
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