She'Ll Always Go On Believing

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Sue doesn’t sit so demurely in her motorised wheelchair. She’ll tell folks to stop gawking as it's very rude to stare! Beneath her tenuous frame is quite a formidable young girl, born with brittle bones but in her wheelchair she can twirl. Sue’s parents sadly told her that her condition is immutable. She is bereft of strong limbs, but her courage is irrefutable. Despite a recent interlude in hospital, she's always cheerful. Don’t treat her like she’s invisible or you may get an earful! She loves to sketch caricatures in her artist’s drawing book and in her specially adapted kitchen Sue is learning to cook. Her physical disability will not prevent her from achieving and her aphorism of life's always been, ‘Never stop believing Sue loves to spend time wheeling around the garden paths, watching chirping sparrows joyfully splashing in bird baths. She paints canvases filled with butterflies and lovely flowers. Sometimes she is quite content to sit there and read for hours. If you are feeling sorry for Sue, don't give it another thought. In her scarlet wheelchair, she's accepted what life has wrought. Each day she finds something to appreciate that gives her a thrill. In truth, she sees more beauty in life than most of us ever will. Eight word Challenge 5 Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton Required words: demurely, sketch, tenuous, brittle, formidable, interlude, bereft, immutable 10-23-17

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Date: 11/4/2017 11:26:00 AM
Very touching Jan, thanks for entering this beauty, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 11/4/2017 1:20:00 PM
Thanks so much for the placement in the contest John it was a real challenge to weave the words into the poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/4/2017 8:44:00 AM
...and I never tire of reading about her courage. I know this one is close to your heart. Congratulations to you, Jan.
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Date: 11/4/2017 1:19:00 PM
Thanks so much Lin, there are some remarkable inspiring people out there who overcome their difficulties and set an example to us all - I will send you a link about a young Manx student from out school who is inspirational after overcoming horrendous health issues. hugs jan xx
Date: 10/25/2017 8:46:00 PM
Such an uplifting and encouraging poem, Jan. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/26/2017 3:27:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, I've worked with students who are confined to wheelchairs and they are inspirational young people:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/24/2017 8:06:00 AM
So sweet and encouraging, Jan. A message that needs repeating to really sink in, xxoo Good Luck!
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Date: 10/24/2017 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Mike, we have a lot to be thankful for and can learn a great deal from others less able than ourselves:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/24/2017 6:59:00 AM
Jan, such a beautiful, inspirational poem. Sometimes we tend to take things for granted, this reminds us we need to be thankful for what we have. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/24/2017 9:01:00 AM
I have worked with student's who are in wheelchair's and they were a joy to be with and never let their disability get in the way:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/24/2017 3:35:00 AM
Heart warming, well woven piece, Jan, will do well, I'm sure. Viv x
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Date: 10/24/2017 8:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Mr Viv, it's so good to see you back:-) Love to Janet and Celeste xx
Date: 10/23/2017 8:17:00 PM
very uplifting and beautifully written, jan! best of luck in the contest - it reads like a winner to me...
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Date: 10/23/2017 6:13:00 PM
Jan, this is a wonderful write! GL on contest! I expect you’ll be at the top!!
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Date: 10/23/2017 6:15:00 PM
I hope John likes it Kim, places in the contest are quite limited:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2017 4:32:00 PM
This is a very beautiful sweet poem!
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Date: 10/23/2017 4:40:00 PM
Thanks Arthur - I hope Darren reads it I think he will be able to relate:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2017 4:02:00 PM
It's all about courage and attitude. Using the required eight words for such a worthwhile topic makes this one special, Jan.
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Date: 10/23/2017 4:40:00 PM
:-) xx
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Date: 10/23/2017 4:30:00 PM
Merci
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Date: 10/23/2017 4:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Lin, its a fictional poem for me but I have worked with children who are in wheelchairs and they are remarkable young people. There are many inspirational people around and you are one of them!:-) hugs jan xx
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