Ann Gilmour Poet Rhyme

Sheer Spirituality

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The Moon ~ Venus ~ and Me
For as far as my eyes could see
It was just us Three
Sheer Spirituality
for 'tis my own private Universe...




Written 15th September 2020

~~after witnessing the most exquisite waning crescent Moon and a sparkling Venus together in the night sky ~ I felt as if I was the only person seeing this truly spiritual sight~~~


Contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE 9
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Contest My Private Universe 
Sponsor Julia Ward
3rd Place

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Sam Kauffman October 5, 2020 at 3:13 PM Ann, you have such a great ability in your writing to capture a single moment - the star of your relationship with infinity! So creative! Congratulations on your win! Sending blessings and hugs~ Ann Gilmour October 5, 2020 at 3:27 PM Bless you Sam ~ wow such beautiful compliments my friend thank you so much. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sigrid Ermine October 4, 2020 at 3:34 PM Hi Anne. Adorable idea! I agree with your stance, or your experience, - the crescent moon, especially when seen 'smiling' upwards is a mesmerising sight. Congratulations on your recognition with your recollection poem.! Ann Gilmour October 5, 2020 at 3:26 PM Well thank you so much Sigrid I am thrilled that you too enjoy the universe and her beauty. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Linda Alice Fowler October 4, 2020 at 1:32 PM Nicely penned Ann - and so creative! Congratulations! Linda Ann Gilmour October 5, 2020 at 3:24 PM Many thanks Linda for your lovely words and congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jeanne Mcgee October 4, 2020 at 7:51 AM Beautiful ! and I love your editing of the first line. congrats on your top win Ann. Ann Gilmour October 5, 2020 at 3:23 PM Thank you so much Jeanne for your 'Beautiful' I always apreciate your lovely comments ~ thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Julia Ward October 4, 2020 at 3:19 AM Special! Well done for your poem's win in my contest, Ann. Ann Gilmour October 4, 2020 at 3:38 AM Wow, thank you so much Julia for my win in your contest. I am delighted! The Moon always fills me with inspiration and joy and Venus is so sparkly and a favourite of mine, so to see them together took me to another place... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios September 21, 2020 at 7:14 AM Good one. Pangie xx Ann Gilmour September 25, 2020 at 3:30 PM My dear Pangie thank you my friend for your loyality and support. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Joseph P. DiMino September 17, 2020 at 1:12 PM True!! No two people are ever seeing the exact same thing due to not being able to occupy the same place at the same time. Now introduce a timeless moment with Almighty Spirit...and that is unique and unforgettable. i think you have one here described beautifully. Ann Gilmour September 25, 2020 at 3:29 PM Thank you very much Joe for your wonderful words and apologies for the delay in answering my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Kim Rodrigues September 17, 2020 at 1:05 PM Cute the way you’ve written this one! Ann Gilmour September 25, 2020 at 3:28 PM Thank you so much dear Kim for your lovely comment and I apologise for the delay in answering my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar September 15, 2020 at 12:21 AM Very original, dear Ann. I did not see that fabulous vista. Engrossed in football. :) ~~ Ann Gilmour September 15, 2020 at 12:53 AM It truly took my breath away and when viewing the moon through my telescope ~ WOW it was fabulous... I stayed out on my balcony for ages just gazing up in awe ~ it was 4.am. Hope your team won Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx