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SHEER SPIRITUALITY

T H E M O O N V E N U S A N D M E
The Moon ~ Venus ~ and Me For as far as my eyes could see It was just us Three Sheer Spirituality for 'tis my own private Universe...
Written 15th September 2020 ~~after witnessing the most exquisite waning crescent Moon and a sparkling Venus together in the night sky ~ I felt as if I was the only person seeing this truly spiritual sight~~~ Contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE 9 Sponsor Brian Strand N/A Contest My Private Universe Sponsor Julia Ward 3rd Place

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Date: 10/5/2020 3:13:00 PM
Ann, you have such a great ability in your writing to capture a single moment - the star of your relationship with infinity! So creative! Congratulations on your win! Sending blessings and hugs~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/5/2020 3:27:00 PM
Bless you Sam ~ wow such beautiful compliments my friend thank you so much. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/4/2020 3:34:00 PM
Hi Anne. Adorable idea! I agree with your stance, or your experience, - the crescent moon, especially when seen 'smiling' upwards is a mesmerising sight. Congratulations on your recognition with your recollection poem.!
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Date: 10/5/2020 3:26:00 PM
Well thank you so much Sigrid I am thrilled that you too enjoy the universe and her beauty. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/4/2020 1:32:00 PM
Nicely penned Ann - and so creative! Congratulations! Linda
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/5/2020 3:24:00 PM
Many thanks Linda for your lovely words and congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/4/2020 7:51:00 AM
Beautiful ! and I love your editing of the first line. congrats on your top win Ann.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/5/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Jeanne for your 'Beautiful' I always apreciate your lovely comments ~ thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/4/2020 3:19:00 AM
Special! Well done for your poem's win in my contest, Ann.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/4/2020 3:38:00 AM
Wow, thank you so much Julia for my win in your contest. I am delighted! The Moon always fills me with inspiration and joy and Venus is so sparkly and a favourite of mine, so to see them together took me to another place... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/21/2020 7:14:00 AM
Good one. Pangie xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/25/2020 3:30:00 PM
My dear Pangie thank you my friend for your loyality and support. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/17/2020 1:12:00 PM
True!! No two people are ever seeing the exact same thing due to not being able to occupy the same place at the same time. Now introduce a timeless moment with Almighty Spirit...and that is unique and unforgettable. i think you have one here described beautifully.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/25/2020 3:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe for your wonderful words and apologies for the delay in answering my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/17/2020 1:05:00 PM
Cute the way you’ve written this one!
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Date: 9/25/2020 3:28:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Kim for your lovely comment and I apologise for the delay in answering my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/15/2020 12:21:00 AM
Very original, dear Ann. I did not see that fabulous vista. Engrossed in football. :) ~~
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Date: 9/15/2020 12:53:00 AM
It truly took my breath away and when viewing the moon through my telescope ~ WOW it was fabulous... I stayed out on my balcony for ages just gazing up in awe ~ it was 4.am. Hope your team won Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx