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May- 6- 2025
Write Fifteen Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest
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Sheer Magic of Happiness

“Happiness is contagious. It can be sparked by one single happy man, making it spread into many, as a small amount of yeast ferments large quantities of dough" – By Poet


Happiness is seeing beauty in simple things. It is drinking nectar from the wellsprings of our heart We sense it as we listen to the sweet warbling of birds. We see it on the beaming faces of children in gregarious company. We feel it as we watch the clouds painted in pretty patterns and shades In the burgundy blush of the welkin, as sun gets ready for his rest. In the beauty of the moon, shimmering on the silvery waters. Happiness flits round the innocent face of a babe, As it is nestled close in the cosy warmth of its mother. It is the sparkle seen reflected in the eyes of a mother, As she cuddles her baby tight to her throbbing bosom. It sneaks into young hearts with sweet whisperings of love. It hides in deep caverns of the mind, jumping out unexpected, But may withdraw into its secret hideout, when invited. Happiness is something that we seek, but sadly it eludes our hold.
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Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 7:41 PM
Wow. This is really great. Is it for a contest. High marks for this one, Valsa
Godwin Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 3:34 PM
Lovely, absolutely. As Victor wrote - a poem to be appreciated. CayCay
Buhagiar Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 1:24 AM
A poem to be appreciated, dear Valsa. Congrats on your win.
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 1:31 AM
- Hi Valsa, back with a congrats on your winning poem :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 1:44 AM
This made my soul warm dear valsa, how absolutely gorgeous is this! Just stunning and flows in such creative and captivating cadence! I especially love "Happiness is seeing beauty in simple things. It is drinking nectar from the wellsprings of our heart" couldnt have said it any better and so true! Sometimes it is by feeding our souls and by listening to the songs within we find true light and happiness! Youve written very well! Absolute pleasure reading this gem! Its a fave for me! Sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 11:58 PM
Creative lines that read like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Happiness is sometimes fleeting but joy is always bubbling up within. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
DiMino Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 11:36 PM
"Happiness flits round the innocent face of a babe, As it is nestled close in the cosy warmth of its mother." -- Lovely imagery, and great theme. Happiness, a radiant beam of love, connecting all species. Though I did get a B- for insisting to my psyche teacher that my dog actually felt love same as people do. Maybe greater.
Gifford Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 2:48 AM
Hello Valsa, this is a beautifully brilliant write and a pleasurable read. Loved it. The last line is so true. Good luck with the contest. Enjoy your day, my poet friend.
Cunningham Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 2:37 AM
Something that we all strive for Valsa, we should always try and spread a little,it costs nothing. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Onclaud Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 2:20 AM
so much joy written on this page, valsa, like ' nectar from the wellspring of our heartS.. ' a lovely write from your moistened pen!
Andresen Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 2:08 AM
- "Happiness is seeing beauty in simple things. It is drinking nectar from the wellsprings of our heart" ... so beautiful and meaningful, Valsa :) - We must never forget the "little everyday" moments - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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