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She Wept In Silence

she wept in silence onto cascading flowers roses and peonies in her wedding bouquet October 7, 2020 Writing Challenge - Septolet Constance La France - Sponsor

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John Castellenas

Date: 10/13/2020 3:31:00 AM

The words were gentle, meaningful and worthwhile. Thank you Jenna for sharing the wonderful poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2020 12:06:00 PM

ahh it makes me feel like she was stood up. Love this. Congrats on the win.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/12/2020 3:52:00 AM

beautiful feelings; tears of silence has the gravity of life!

John Watt

Date: 10/11/2020 2:37:00 PM

Jenna, I loved the ambiguity of this septolet, allowing the reader to draw their own conclusion. Tears can be happy ones or sad, or oftentimes a combination of many emotions. The beauty of the flowers and the significance of the event adds to the gravitas, and all in only 14 words. I congratulate you for your win with this marvelous write ~ John

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 3:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for your insightful response, John.

Constance La France

Date: 10/11/2020 6:46:00 AM

Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet with this wonderful poem _Constance

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 3:38:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2020 1:16:00 PM

- Back with congratulations, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 3:38:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/10/2020 12:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win in the contest for your misery/happiness-mixed peace on silence, Jenna!!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2020 3:38:00 AM

Thank you, Newton.

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/8/2020 4:07:00 PM

Another ace Jenna! Good job and good luck in the contest!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2020 10:00:00 AM

Encouragement from your pen, as always, Mark. Thank you.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/7/2020 7:07:00 PM

Very profound sadness, a vision of a sorrowful bride, lovely, Jenna~

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2020 10:00:00 AM

Thank you very much, Michelle.

John Gondolf

Date: 10/7/2020 12:28:00 PM

Very beautiful and touching, Jenna, best of luck in the contest. I hope Delta spares you this weekend. I will keep you in my thoughts. Hugs.

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/7/2020 1:14:00 PM

Thanks, John. It was only a matter of time before the bullseye is painted over me. Luck doesn't hold forever.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/7/2020 12:11:00 PM

- Tears of happiness and beautiful bouquet, Jenna :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/7/2020 1:13:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/7/2020 7:50:00 AM

Hmmm. Gives one pause. Happy tears? Or sad? Very well-done Jenna! GL with this one! Linda

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/7/2020 11:31:00 AM

Hi, Linda, I smiled when I read your comment. It was my intent to leave the reason for her tears to the reader. Happy for marrying the man she loved, or sad because of it?

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/7/2020 6:40:00 AM

Hello Jenna Logan, a weeping bride! I was a weeping bride's maid. A weeping bride! Enjoy your day my friend.

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/7/2020 11:30:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene. Have a great Wednesday.