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She Wept In Silence

she wept 
  in silence
       onto cascading
             flowers
 
       roses 
  and peonies
       in her wedding
            bouquet





October 7, 2020
Writing Challenge - Septolet
Constance La France - Sponsor

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John Castellenas Date: 10/13/2020 3:31:00 AM The words were gentle, meaningful and worthwhile. Thank you Jenna for sharing the wonderful poetry. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/12/2020 12:06:00 PM ahh it makes me feel like she was stood up. Love this. Congrats on the win. Login to Reply

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 10/12/2020 3:52:00 AM beautiful feelings; tears of silence has the gravity of life! Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 10/11/2020 2:37:00 PM Jenna, I loved the ambiguity of this septolet, allowing the reader to draw their own conclusion. Tears can be happy ones or sad, or oftentimes a combination of many emotions. The beauty of the flowers and the significance of the event adds to the gravitas, and all in only 14 words. I congratulate you for your win with this marvelous write ~ John Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/12/2020 3:39:00 AM Thank you so much for your insightful response, John.

Constance La France Date: 10/11/2020 6:46:00 AM Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet with this wonderful poem _Constance Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/12/2020 3:38:00 AM Thank you very much.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/10/2020 1:16:00 PM - Back with congratulations, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/12/2020 3:38:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Newton Ranaweera Date: 10/10/2020 12:58:00 PM Congratulations on your great win in the contest for your misery/happiness-mixed peace on silence, Jenna!! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/12/2020 3:38:00 AM Thank you, Newton.

Mark Koplin Date: 10/8/2020 4:07:00 PM Another ace Jenna! Good job and good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/10/2020 10:00:00 AM Encouragement from your pen, as always, Mark. Thank you.

Michelle Faulkner Date: 10/7/2020 7:07:00 PM Very profound sadness, a vision of a sorrowful bride, lovely, Jenna~ Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/10/2020 10:00:00 AM Thank you very much, Michelle.

John Gondolf Date: 10/7/2020 12:28:00 PM Very beautiful and touching, Jenna, best of luck in the contest. I hope Delta spares you this weekend. I will keep you in my thoughts. Hugs. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/7/2020 1:14:00 PM Thanks, John. It was only a matter of time before the bullseye is painted over me. Luck doesn't hold forever.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/7/2020 12:11:00 PM - Tears of happiness and beautiful bouquet, Jenna :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/7/2020 1:13:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/7/2020 7:50:00 AM Hmmm. Gives one pause. Happy tears? Or sad? Very well-done Jenna! GL with this one! Linda Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/7/2020 11:31:00 AM Hi, Linda, I smiled when I read your comment. It was my intent to leave the reason for her tears to the reader. Happy for marrying the man she loved, or sad because of it?

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 10/7/2020 6:40:00 AM Hello Jenna Logan, a weeping bride! I was a weeping bride's maid. A weeping bride! Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/7/2020 11:30:00 AM Thanks, Darlene. Have a great Wednesday.