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02/28/26

 

Just a fun scribbble! word play on blue tits but I had to do it as one word otherwise the word is starred out - gee it can mean a bird as well as boobies!

she was stark naked!

nude sunbathing on a winter’s day I saw two bluetits!
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Peranteau Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 7:20 PM
oops...ment to add and zap'd my 1st comment...anywho...were you not expecting me to read this write....lmao...lol...yuh sure that weren't diver'z purple ')> definitely funny dear poet...much love
Lane Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 8:33 AM
Hmmm…. I see why women are called birds in your neck of the woods
bard Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 4:55 PM
bard Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 10:36 PM
Then she went swimming like the breast strokers in your previous poem
bard Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 4:58 PM
LOL!!! Very funny
Crandall Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 7:51 PM
haha, aren't boobies also a kind of bird?
bard Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 4:58 PM
so are shags
Kitchin Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 2:08 PM
Jan, hilarious and pun intended. -hugs
Bauer Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 12:49 PM
ha! glad you didn't get the dreaded asterisks, jan! fun poem...
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 10:06 AM
That’s a fine pair of wintered blue-tits Jan, (get them out for the lads) haha! cheers David!
Jones Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 1:59 AM
lol! Hilarious
G  Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 12:31 AM
Love it Jan! I'm not sure if the exhibitionists are rarer or my sensibilities have had to adjust - they seem harder to spot these days :)
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2026 at 6:54 PM
cute and funny..
May Avatar
February 28, 2026 at 5:35 PM
Lol, Nice one Jan,
Terry Avatar
February 28, 2026 at 4:02 PM
This is a funny play on words. Excellent work!
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2026 at 4:07 PM
Thanks Angela, i saw a couple of birds testing out my nesting box but thought I would write a silly poem around that:-) hugs Jan x
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