She Was Sky

When she was sky, their eyes held awe and fear
Meek worship of her chariots of sun
To her magnificence, they kneel, undone
On stone's sacrificial alter, revere

When she was heaven, paved in streets of gold
Preachers promised cleansed blood of sin, redeem
Salvation's ladder lift devout's esteem
Confession's coin, price of paradise sold

Now she is space astronauts navigate
Pure mathematical mystery explores
Modern Magellans map celestial shores
Lissome light's infinite answers await.

8/16/19

Writing Challenge 2 - August 2019 Enclosed Rhyme
Sponsor: Dear Heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 3:45 PM
This is a wonderful entry Michelle! Congratulations on your win! ; ) xxoo
La France Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 12:23 PM
Michelle, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your Enclosed Rhyme. Nice write !
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 11:36 PM
Congratulations Michelle. Hugs Eve
Toney Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 10:16 PM
Michelle, this is brilliant! A Fav for me. ~Mark
Kiser Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Like everything else, she is forced to change. Beautifully penned.
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