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She Was Empathetic Loving and Giving

A woman who did not want more schooling She graduated high school at sixteen and did not look back Taking a job, so she could be independent and move in to town Why she would leave the country I will never know One of seven children, she was surrounded by cousins. And brothers and sisters, and farm animals. Her childhood job was the chicken house She collected eggs until it burned down No one wanted chickens after that stench She was a Godly woman, who married a spiritual man. She knew the value of his soul, even if he was not a Bible believer They raised us to do the right thing and be kind and compassionate They both had a strong sense of ethics. She was the best cook I have encountered in my sixty plus years. She knitted, crocheted, made beautiful quilts and tatted. Her beef and noodles over mashed potatoes were legendary. She had a hilarious sense of humor, but she did not ridicule people. She was beautiful inside and out, but did not flaunt either. She was empathetic, loving and giving But she did not say "I love you" for about fifty years Because she had not been taught that. She wanted her children to grow up strong and she got her wish. She is my hero. She is my mother. I thought she would live to be one hundred and twelve. I was devastated when cancer killed her at eighty-eight.

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Date: 5/19/2021 8:17:00 AM
A marvelous tribute to your mother, Caren. I loved my mother, too. Could see so much of her in your mother. My mom died at 42...cancer!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/20/2021 2:40:00 AM
Oh man! Forty-two! She was just a baby! My youngest daughter is 42! I cannot imagine losing her. I am shocked. I was really angry that my mother left at 88, I cannot imagine losing her at 42. So sad. Cancer is such a terrible disease. It took my paternal grandmother one month before my identical twin and I were born. She had three boys and had always wanted "a girl". She did not see us on earth, but I know she saw us from heaven. Our female cousin Lou was born the next year.
Date: 5/19/2021 5:16:00 AM
A lovely tribute to your Mother Caren, I think we've all lost a loved one to that scourge of mankind, cancer. Tom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/19/2021 5:49:00 AM
Thank you Tom

Book: Shattered Sighs