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She Walked Away - Make Their Jaws Drop contest

He watched her walk away that day
The tears ran down his nose
Her walk was frisky from behind
She knew just how to pose

He recalled those soft summer nights
When they would ride 'til dawn
He'd rub her shoulders gently then
'Til all the ache was gone

Then they'd stand high on mountain tops
While she would breathe the air
They'd watch the world as it rolled by
Without a single care

Then hard times came and raised their head
He was forced to sell her
He was a horse breeder, that's all -
Not a wealthy feller

May 13, 2016, for contest Make Their Jaws Drop

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Date: 7/14/2016 2:49:00 AM
Congrats Larry, for your top placement with this wonderful verse!! ;-)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/14/2016 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy!
Date: 7/13/2016 5:37:00 PM
I love this and understand the feeling. Great twist. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/14/2016 10:52:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce...I had hoped to write something that you'd like..being a distinguished Cowboy Poet!!...Larry
Date: 7/12/2016 11:18:00 PM
Larry, Congrats on your "Jaws Dropping win." Love SKAT*ace
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/14/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thanks SKAT..nice to hear from you..Larry
Date: 7/12/2016 6:18:00 PM
Love the twist at the end larry many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/14/2016 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Jan..I'm glad you liked it...Larry
Date: 5/13/2016 5:29:00 PM
This is great! I picked up on some jaw dropping intimacy.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/14/2016 6:05:00 AM
Thank you, Lukas
Date: 5/13/2016 5:13:00 PM
Very interesting and nice feeling, Larry
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/14/2016 6:05:00 AM
Thank you!