Debbie Duncan Poet Couplet

She Waits

She Waits with wanton desires 
It's been six months out to sea

She read from his words 
He did not disappoint  her 

Words of love & lust dripped 
From Lavender scented pages

She longed to read those words 
Seemed forever and a day 

You know where to stand 
Where I can see all of your glory

Do not wash, I dream of your smell 
So there she stood  "waiting "
 For the captain of her heart!  

8pm 10/ 13/ 2011

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Paul Callus May 1, 2014 at 2:06 PM Lovely and romantic read Debbie. Looking forward with desire for him to return. What a build-up! // paul

Tara Jennings July 13, 2013 at 10:49 AM i wrote a poem about waiting forever and day, i think I have been waiting for those I love for a long time, completely understand

Don Johnson July 8, 2013 at 3:41 AM Toe-n-Toe and the flow tween toe n toe, it rose to a fever pitch, tween her thighs she gripped him, just so! the heat of the flesh ceased to itch, just a bit..... but he was rising and rising some more, though.... till into the blackness, exhaustion he slipped......Don re:Debbie Duncan "She Waits" Debbie Duncan July 8, 2013 at 1:50 PM Does that mean you liked it Don ;}

Bukang Liwayway June 24, 2013 at 12:19 PM wow!! so romantic!! a very nice poem of yours friend Debbie ;) I like it..Have a nice day :) Maria Debbie Duncan June 24, 2013 at 5:29 PM Thank you Maria ;}

Cecilia Macfarlane June 23, 2013 at 6:33 PM Dreamy write full of love and desire. I like very much. Hugs Debbie Duncan June 24, 2013 at 5:48 PM Thank you Cecilia ;}

Keith Bickerstaffe June 22, 2013 at 8:48 PM Whoops! I'm sorry Debbie... what a goofball I am!

Keith Bickerstaffe June 22, 2013 at 8:46 PM Very romantic! How hard it must be for wives/lovers when their men are away at sea with no idea when they will return. Well done Donna! Best wishes, Keith

Shiraz Iqbal June 17, 2013 at 11:05 PM That waits thing yeah that exists even not being a sea captain..... It just captures your thoughts..Am having wonderful morning reading your works Shiraz Debbie Duncan June 18, 2013 at 12:46 AM I thank you ;}

Rascal Jones June 17, 2013 at 10:02 AM Hi, Debbie … I love well-writ arousing poetry, and you've definitely stirred me in all the right places with this one. As a sailor, there is o much dancing forth from your words I relate to, especially: "You know where to stand Where I can see all of your glory Do not wash, I dream of your smell" Stimulating imagery, Milady. Warmest hug of thanks to you, Debbie ~ Richard Debbie Duncan June 17, 2013 at 12:16 PM Thank you Richard ;}

Maritza Pagan June 17, 2013 at 10:00 AM very nice read... love-how can we live without it

Mario De Paz June 15, 2013 at 8:24 AM It is a poem of involving love done of sensual feelings too Debbie Duncan June 17, 2013 at 5:20 PM Thank you Mario ;}

Johnny Rhinem June 14, 2013 at 1:06 AM Ps., I Was Thinking About My Ex-Girlfriend When I Poe'd The Grim Reaper, Beautiful Debbie. Thank You For Your Beauty's Kind Visit. Love, John Debbie Duncan June 15, 2013 at 4:55 PM Thank you Johnny ;}

Duke Beaufort June 13, 2013 at 5:21 PM Debbie, you are being very romantic, and also you tap into the senses. Now, I never know whether you are writing from some kind of personal experience or from empathy with something you've seen or perhaps something completely different. I always want to know what inspires a poet's words. However, now you always have me guessing. In any case, it is a pleasure to see what you've created. Thank-you for all your comments and kindness. CIAO! Debbie Duncan June 13, 2013 at 6:14 PM Thank you Duke ;}

Phyllis Babcock June 13, 2013 at 4:03 PM Nice romantic tale to this wonderful poem. love phyl Debbie Duncan June 13, 2013 at 4:18 PM Thank you Phyllis ;}

Jack Ellison June 13, 2013 at 2:51 PM Sorry I haven't been around as much lately, dear Debbie! Moving on Tuesday and should be back on track after that! Hugs, Jack xoxox Debbie Duncan June 13, 2013 at 4:15 PM See you when you get back ;}

Poet Tacito June 13, 2013 at 10:06 AM This was very cool! A need for the one to return. Nicely done! :) Debbie Duncan June 13, 2013 at 11:39 PM Thank you Drake ;}

Cherl Dunn June 12, 2013 at 4:56 PM Ok write not my taste but well written. Debbie Duncan June 14, 2013 at 12:50 AM Thank you for reading Cherl ;}

Robert Pettit June 12, 2013 at 12:53 PM Reminds me of a eighties hit song by a Swiss group known as "Double". Good write. Debbie Duncan June 12, 2013 at 1:33 PM Thank you Robert ;}

Don Johnson June 12, 2013 at 12:03 AM reunions are great ...better than the make up ones

Johnny Rhinem June 11, 2013 at 9:52 PM Smile, Here I Am Baby! Sorry That It Took So Long But I Was Struggling With A Great White Louistia Shark Off The Southern Coast Of California. This Is Beautiful And You Are Beautiful! Just Kidding About The Here I Am Baby But, I Just Dig Your Verse. Love, John Debbie Duncan June 12, 2013 at 12:05 PM Thank you Johnny ;}

Sara Kendrick June 11, 2013 at 7:12 AM Enjoyed reading your very unique work..Very sensual indeed..Thanks for your kind visit..Sara Debbie Duncan June 12, 2013 at 12:57 AM Thank you Sara ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2013 at 2:30 AM - This is so sweet, Debbie. - I love it! - Well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan June 12, 2013 at 12:46 AM Thank you Anne ;}

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2013 at 1:03 AM I like this one. I am curious though. Can couplets be unrhymed? Maybe. IN any event, great little poem. Debbie Duncan June 11, 2013 at 1:29 AM Thank you ;}