She Waits...

Perched on an altar of stone,
Enduring the weather of time.
	She waits...

A marble heart laments,
Sorrow...forever etched...as,
	She waits...

Her eyes filled with a glimmer of hope,
Embracing her lonely stand.
	She waits...

Immortal expressions of yearning,
Shaded by the garish sun...as,
	She waits...

For a moment...happiness embraces her, 
As she gazes at a seagull on her arm...while,
	She waits...

Facing a familiar horizon,
Profound longing radiates the cold sea...as,
	She waits...






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Inspired by the Statue of Opatija
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gorelick Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Youve taught me something today..well, not just today..smile. I had never heard of this. Love it. Bg
Gorelick Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Youve taught me something today..well, not just today..smile. I had never heard of this. Love it. Bg
Pickett Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Awesome poetry today my friend..... :JP]
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 8:59 AM
Awesome. and goes to favs!! andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 4:56 PM
I'll have to look it up but sounds like you have done a great job here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Goff Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 3:24 PM
amazing! you invite the reader to become this statue! feeling all these emotions! how cool is that! you are a cornerstone of talent here my friend! God Bless You in 2k10! jimbo
Fraser Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 2:38 PM
Excellent free verse Raul to a wonderful statue in Opatija, Croatia. I had the pleasure of being there in 1987 before the Balkans War >> if you ever get a chance to go to Croatia, garb it, its just gorgeous there, and hardly touched during the conflict >> James
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