She Tore Into the Night

She tore into the night.....

   like little lightning bolts,

With a carriage made of scents of him,

   sifting her soul ----

   his touch..... 

   she longed.....

Neath that naked moon,

   meshed as one;

   not a star amiss ----

The twinkling of their kisses sweet 

   stardust upon their lips,

   as soft skin greets biting tongues

   long to seeking love


Up against a trunk of a maple.....

   his hands lifting higher her skirt,

   a deft brush upon her aching bosom,

   sugared surrender.....


She met him again, 

   waiting tall in the shadows, smiling

(She did not wait)

   she tore into the night.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 11:45 PM
You must be Canadian!! A very passionate write, with a lot between the lines! Great poem!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 7:15 PM
Thanks arthur! We Canucks are a passionate lot....
Anish Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 11:43 AM
Very passionate work here! Vivid and sensual! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Chircop Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 6:56 AM
: ) ( She did not wait)-She tore into the night..Of course neath the naked moon the mood couldn t be better.An ardent and effrvescent poem Keith .
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March 31, 2014 at 11:43 PM
WOW! Shifting her soul..... How sweet when passion like this takes controls of every feeling inside.... I love the poem... Linda
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 12:57 PM
:-) wink/wink/ BIG hugs! (love Keith)!
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