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She Smells of Seashells

Sister Susie sits shelling shellfish in summer
Shelling shellfish sister Susie sits
Shellfish scent secreted on Susie’s sundress…
Sadly sister Susie stinks!

16th June 2016

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Wendy Rycroft Date: 6/20/2016 12:17:00 PM Very cleaver well done x Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/20/2016 4:42:00 PM Thanks Wendy just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama Date: 6/20/2016 6:06:00 AM This is absolutely brilliant. Well done. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/20/2016 7:27:00 AM Thanks Funom:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray Date: 6/18/2016 6:25:00 PM Sister Susie should shower shortly! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2016 7:12:00 AM she sure should!:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray Date: 6/18/2016 6:24:00 PM Sister Susie should shower shortly! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2016 7:12:00 AM LOl:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/17/2016 7:46:00 PM I don't like seafood very much and the pictures are a bit disgusting to me. hahaha Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/18/2016 2:11:00 AM I like the little pink prawns thats it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/17/2016 7:45:00 PM haha, I bet I would not be able to say it fast without stumbling!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/18/2016 2:10:00 AM Nor me lol:-) hugs jan xx

Mama Bear Date: 6/17/2016 6:13:00 PM Give her a bath and send her to the dairy Amazing what whipped cream can do Hugs Edith Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/17/2016 6:23:00 PM ha ha ha you've been reading my limerick lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Hauser Date: 6/17/2016 8:07:00 AM Hahaha! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/17/2016 8:16:00 AM Just posted pig limerick too :-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel Date: 6/17/2016 12:51:00 AM A great tongue twister:) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/17/2016 1:31:00 AM Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman Date: 6/16/2016 10:29:00 PM A cute tongue twister, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/17/2016 1:32:00 AM Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos Date: 6/16/2016 7:47:00 PM Secreted? Girl you're on a sexy roll Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/17/2016 1:32:00 AM LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop Date: 6/16/2016 7:14:00 PM lol : )..Tnks for the entertainment. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/17/2016 1:33:00 AM Thanks Charma:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 6/16/2016 5:50:00 PM Nicely done Jan a tongue twister and a real smile twister at the end , nicely written Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/17/2016 1:33:00 AM Thanks Robert:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman Date: 6/16/2016 5:13:00 PM Hi Jan, not only extremely funny but very clever also,,,tried reading quickly just to see if i could, still tongue tied. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/16/2016 5:14:00 PM Thanks so much Harry I do appreciate your feedback:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/16/2016 3:40:00 PM - Poor sister Susie .....no good smell ..... but tastes good - Love it, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/16/2016 3:43:00 PM LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/16/2016 3:32:00 PM I loved the laugh I got with your ending Jan...thanks for that! #7 ; ) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/16/2016 3:34:00 PM Thanks Connie just felt like doing something a little different and using alliteration... you know me I have to try and make people smile:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 6/16/2016 3:20:00 PM Simply stunningly sad....she should shower : ) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/16/2016 3:21:00 PM LOL - I wrote this today lol I worry about my muse sometimes lol:-) hugs Jan xx