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She Smells of Seashells

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Sister Susie sits shelling shellfish in summer Shelling shellfish sister Susie sits Shellfish scent secreted on Susie’s sundress… Sadly sister Susie stinks! 16th June 2016

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 6/20/2016 12:17:00 PM

Very cleaver well done x

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2016 4:42:00 PM

Thanks Wendy just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 6/20/2016 6:06:00 AM

This is absolutely brilliant. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2016 7:27:00 AM

Thanks Funom:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 6/18/2016 6:25:00 PM

Sister Susie should shower shortly!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2016 7:12:00 AM

she sure should!:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 6/18/2016 6:24:00 PM

Sister Susie should shower shortly!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2016 7:12:00 AM

LOl:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2016 7:46:00 PM

I don't like seafood very much and the pictures are a bit disgusting to me. hahaha

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2016 2:11:00 AM

I like the little pink prawns thats it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2016 7:45:00 PM

haha, I bet I would not be able to say it fast without stumbling!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2016 2:10:00 AM

Nor me lol:-) hugs jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 6/17/2016 6:13:00 PM

Give her a bath and send her to the dairy Amazing what whipped cream can do Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 6:23:00 PM

ha ha ha you've been reading my limerick lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Hauser

Date: 6/17/2016 8:07:00 AM

Hahaha!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 8:16:00 AM

Just posted pig limerick too :-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/17/2016 12:51:00 AM

A great tongue twister:)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 1:31:00 AM

Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/16/2016 10:29:00 PM

A cute tongue twister, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 1:32:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 6/16/2016 7:47:00 PM

Secreted? Girl you're on a sexy roll

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 1:32:00 AM

LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/16/2016 7:14:00 PM

lol : )..Tnks for the entertainment.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 1:33:00 AM

Thanks Charma:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 6/16/2016 5:50:00 PM

Nicely done Jan a tongue twister and a real smile twister at the end , nicely written Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 1:33:00 AM

Thanks Robert:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/16/2016 5:13:00 PM

Hi Jan, not only extremely funny but very clever also,,,tried reading quickly just to see if i could, still tongue tied.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2016 5:14:00 PM

Thanks so much Harry I do appreciate your feedback:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/16/2016 3:40:00 PM

- Poor sister Susie .....no good smell ..... but tastes good - Love it, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2016 3:43:00 PM

LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/16/2016 3:32:00 PM

I loved the laugh I got with your ending Jan...thanks for that! #7 ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2016 3:34:00 PM

Thanks Connie just felt like doing something a little different and using alliteration... you know me I have to try and make people smile:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/16/2016 3:20:00 PM

Simply stunningly sad....she should shower : )

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2016 3:21:00 PM

LOL - I wrote this today lol I worry about my muse sometimes lol:-) hugs Jan xx