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Sister Susie sits shelling shellfish in summer Shelling shellfish sister Susie sits Shellfish scent secreted on Susie’s sundress… Sadly sister Susie stinks! 16th June 2016

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Date: 6/20/2016 12:17:00 PM
Very cleaver well done x
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/20/2016 4:42:00 PM
Thanks Wendy just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/20/2016 6:06:00 AM
This is absolutely brilliant. Well done.
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Date: 6/20/2016 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Funom:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/18/2016 6:25:00 PM
Sister Susie should shower shortly!
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Date: 6/19/2016 7:12:00 AM
she sure should!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/18/2016 6:24:00 PM
Sister Susie should shower shortly!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/19/2016 7:12:00 AM
LOl:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/17/2016 7:46:00 PM
I don't like seafood very much and the pictures are a bit disgusting to me. hahaha
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Date: 6/18/2016 2:11:00 AM
I like the little pink prawns thats it lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/17/2016 7:45:00 PM
haha, I bet I would not be able to say it fast without stumbling!!
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Date: 6/18/2016 2:10:00 AM
Nor me lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/17/2016 6:13:00 PM
Give her a bath and send her to the dairy Amazing what whipped cream can do Hugs Edith
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/17/2016 6:23:00 PM
ha ha ha you've been reading my limerick lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/17/2016 8:07:00 AM
Hahaha!
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Date: 6/17/2016 8:16:00 AM
Just posted pig limerick too :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/17/2016 12:51:00 AM
A great tongue twister:)
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Date: 6/17/2016 1:31:00 AM
Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/16/2016 10:29:00 PM
A cute tongue twister, Jan!
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Date: 6/17/2016 1:32:00 AM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/16/2016 7:47:00 PM
Secreted? Girl you're on a sexy roll
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Date: 6/17/2016 1:32:00 AM
LOL:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/16/2016 7:14:00 PM
lol : )..Tnks for the entertainment.
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Date: 6/17/2016 1:33:00 AM
Thanks Charma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/16/2016 5:50:00 PM
Nicely done Jan a tongue twister and a real smile twister at the end , nicely written Jan.
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Date: 6/17/2016 1:33:00 AM
Thanks Robert:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/16/2016 5:13:00 PM
Hi Jan, not only extremely funny but very clever also,,,tried reading quickly just to see if i could, still tongue tied.
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Date: 6/16/2016 5:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Harry I do appreciate your feedback:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/16/2016 3:40:00 PM
- Poor sister Susie .....no good smell ..... but tastes good - Love it, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/16/2016 3:43:00 PM
LOL:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/16/2016 3:32:00 PM
I loved the laugh I got with your ending Jan...thanks for that! #7 ; )
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Date: 6/16/2016 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Connie just felt like doing something a little different and using alliteration... you know me I have to try and make people smile:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/16/2016 3:20:00 PM
Simply stunningly sad....she should shower : )
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Date: 6/16/2016 3:21:00 PM
LOL - I wrote this today lol I worry about my muse sometimes lol:-) hugs Jan xx