Jan Allison Poet Alliteration

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She Smells of Seashells

Sister Susie sits shelling shellfish in summer
Shelling shellfish sister Susie sits
Shellfish scent secreted on Susie’s sundress…
Sadly sister Susie stinks!

16th June 2016

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Wendy Rycroft June 20, 2016 at 12:17 PM Very cleaver well done x Jan Allison June 20, 2016 at 4:42 PM Thanks Wendy just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama June 20, 2016 at 6:06 AM This is absolutely brilliant. Well done. Jan Allison June 20, 2016 at 7:27 AM Thanks Funom:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray June 18, 2016 at 6:25 PM Sister Susie should shower shortly! Jan Allison June 19, 2016 at 7:12 AM she sure should!:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray June 18, 2016 at 6:24 PM Sister Susie should shower shortly! Jan Allison June 19, 2016 at 7:12 AM LOl:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2016 at 7:46 PM I don't like seafood very much and the pictures are a bit disgusting to me. hahaha Jan Allison June 18, 2016 at 2:11 AM I like the little pink prawns thats it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2016 at 7:45 PM haha, I bet I would not be able to say it fast without stumbling!! Jan Allison June 18, 2016 at 2:10 AM Nor me lol:-) hugs jan xx

Mama Bear June 17, 2016 at 6:13 PM Give her a bath and send her to the dairy Amazing what whipped cream can do Hugs Edith Jan Allison June 17, 2016 at 6:23 PM ha ha ha you've been reading my limerick lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Hauser June 17, 2016 at 8:07 AM Hahaha! Jan Allison June 17, 2016 at 8:16 AM Just posted pig limerick too :-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel June 17, 2016 at 12:51 AM A great tongue twister:) Jan Allison June 17, 2016 at 1:31 AM Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman June 16, 2016 at 10:29 PM A cute tongue twister, Jan! Jan Allison June 17, 2016 at 1:32 AM Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos June 16, 2016 at 7:47 PM Secreted? Girl you're on a sexy roll Jan Allison June 17, 2016 at 1:32 AM LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop June 16, 2016 at 7:14 PM lol : )..Tnks for the entertainment. Jan Allison June 17, 2016 at 1:33 AM Thanks Charma:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr June 16, 2016 at 5:50 PM Nicely done Jan a tongue twister and a real smile twister at the end , nicely written Jan. Jan Allison June 17, 2016 at 1:33 AM Thanks Robert:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman June 16, 2016 at 5:13 PM Hi Jan, not only extremely funny but very clever also,,,tried reading quickly just to see if i could, still tongue tied. Jan Allison June 16, 2016 at 5:14 PM Thanks so much Harry I do appreciate your feedback:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen June 16, 2016 at 3:40 PM - Poor sister Susie .....no good smell ..... but tastes good - Love it, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison June 16, 2016 at 3:43 PM LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong June 16, 2016 at 3:32 PM I loved the laugh I got with your ending Jan...thanks for that! #7 ; ) Jan Allison June 16, 2016 at 3:34 PM Thanks Connie just felt like doing something a little different and using alliteration... you know me I have to try and make people smile:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith June 16, 2016 at 3:20 PM Simply stunningly sad....she should shower : ) Jan Allison June 16, 2016 at 3:21 PM LOL - I wrote this today lol I worry about my muse sometimes lol:-) hugs Jan xx