She Sits Beguiled and Alone

It's a long, long way down the park, but she’s deeply inclined, inclined to roam hover or linger among webs of an inky fog just like her mashed hair: and sepia eyes ignore jagged blinks of lamp lights climbing inside a mind. As she sits alone on a bench to crumple near nuptial's farewell letter, her delicate face bows like a waylaid nightingale-- juxtaposed by the many drones of sullen notes almost lost in a haze along paths searching for mirth, searching mock. Beguiled, bothered, bruised through darkness; her hidden sobs yell wildly at Eve's moonglow. Written for Eve Roper's She Sits Alone Contest Syllable Count: 138 8/11/2017
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Inman Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:55 PM
"Eve's moonglow." Interesting choice of words. Lovely sad lonely write.
Ashley Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 8:16 PM
Beautifully sad Nette, a great poem. Congratulations on your win!
May Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 7:45 PM
Congrats on your win Nette
Roper Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Nette, very sad, well-crafted poem with, fantastic flow . Congratulations on your win. ~*
Fleming Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 4:42 AM
As Robert remarks below--"A fine write, Nette"! The last line is particularly heart-wrenching: "her hidden sobs yell wildly at Eve's moonglow". "Moonglow" - Just love that word! My very warmest regards as always, Nette. :) john P.s You have always, and quite rightly so, been regarded as a most creative poet! :)
Kiser Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:13 PM
Very nice, well penned.
Horsman Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 5:07 PM
awesome nette, truly lovely to read..
Sathasivam Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 10:56 AM
Excellent . Poem crafted very well. Enjoyed reading it.
Daniel Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 11:36 PM
What a sad interpretation! Lovely though, all the best, Nette:)
May Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 6:05 PM
A well crafted write Nette...best wishes
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 4:34 PM
Beautiful flow--creative--you got so much from that portrait Nette. Good luck for the contest.
Sivey Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 4:07 PM
What an inspiring write! That's one thing that always happens after I read one of your poems...I get inspired to write a special one! Maybe you'll get to read it if it is good enough! What a lovely poem Nette, such a powerful image you paint with your incredible words my friend! Such imagery, Great Work!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 2:48 PM
I love it Nette! I went to look at the picture on the contest but it has vanished. I need it to be inspired to write a poem about her. Your poem is very moving and I am sure will impress Eve. I love your play on words in your ending in reference to Eve. Very clever! : )
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 2:28 PM
- You have described the picture with beautiful lines, Nette - A pleasure to read - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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