She Sits Alone

Two gazes crossed in the crowded room
Discreetly, without being discovered 
Sending a message that only someone
Who is in love decodes its meaning 

Sometimes eyes reveal the feelings 
Buried in the depths of the soul
Unrevealed and taken to afterworld 
For the fear of uncover the heart

Wandering about the color of love
Young lady sits in a wood bench 
Golden leaves falling as a shower 
Covering her brunette wavy hair

Gallant gentleman approached the lady
Talking about the azure hues in the sky
Rising a curtain of hope for the future
Only time will tell the happy ending 

For She Sits Alone Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Eve 
Second Place
August 10, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/16/2018 3:57:00 PM
A poem that faithfully produces what is everyday life in a beautiful and hopeful way. The human touch. Very well done. Best regards from David in NZ
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/25/2018 7:51:00 PM
Thank you David.
Date: 8/13/2017 8:18:00 PM
An intriguing and lovely poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/14/2017 6:48:00 AM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 8/13/2017 6:24:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Nayda , a well-crafted poem. I love the scene you've created of a romantic rendezvous, . Congratulations on your win. ~*
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/13/2017 6:59:00 PM
Thank you Eve. Feel honoured with my placement.
Date: 8/11/2017 7:49:00 AM
Very interesting how love develops in two people's lives, nice write, Nayda:)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/11/2017 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Jo.
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