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She Sits Alone

His interest awakens, as he laid eyes on a young maiden sitting there alone. How lovely she is, graceful and beautiful. Her auburn hair done up in a thick braid, crowning her head with small stray tendrils, curling about her fair heart shape ethereal face, above a long neck, and delicate shoulders it graced. For a brief moment, his gaze locked with her hazel gold eyes, amazed and in thoughts of sweet illusion of having her near. Wanting to kiss her long and sweetly, whisper you are mine forever in her ear. 8/3/2017

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Date: 6/22/2021 6:23:00 PM
A sweet love poem, Eve! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/21/2021 5:29:00 AM
Picturesque. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/13/2017 4:24:00 PM
Oh, this is so lovely Eve, and I love the Painting!!!!
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Date: 8/9/2017 6:50:00 AM
Wow. Nice love poem. We should always admire and yearn for the things we love. Keep it up.
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Date: 8/7/2017 10:57:00 PM
Eve, you always compose a great poem. Trying to follow. Hugs
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Date: 8/6/2017 7:56:00 PM
Hi Eve: I loved this poem and I was deeply inspired by this love story.
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Date: 8/5/2017 3:41:00 AM
So romantic. Love at first sight...Well penned. GL Sunita :)
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Date: 8/4/2017 11:53:00 PM
What a beautiful painting combined with such lovely lines, art at its best, Eve:)
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Date: 8/4/2017 8:17:00 PM
That's a beautiful picture you've done and the poem just makes it even better. Beautiful!
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Date: 8/4/2017 8:54:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Alesia, I hope you enter the contest ~*
Date: 8/4/2017 11:37:00 AM
What an amazing painting you have done Eve ! :)
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Date: 8/4/2017 8:54:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Heidi :) ~*
Date: 8/4/2017 6:44:00 AM
A beautifull painted picture by you Eve, and the poem so tender and sweet, I love it....Maria
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Date: 8/4/2017 8:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Maria, I hope you enter the contest ~*
Date: 8/4/2017 12:08:00 AM
Oh wow- I had not even realized it's your own painting (I can see the signature now). Stunning! You are so talented, Eve.
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Date: 8/4/2017 8:57:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Agnes, I hope you enter the contest ~*
Date: 8/3/2017 8:11:00 PM
Your poem paints a lovely image, just like the painting.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/3/2017 8:15:00 PM
thank you , Agnes, the mural was painted by me many years ago...
Date: 8/3/2017 6:17:00 PM
Beautifully written Eve! I really enjoyed reading this brilliantly done poem here this evening! You have brought me a smile with the tenderness of this piece! Great Work!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/3/2017 8:16:00 PM
thank you , Russel, I hope you write a poem for the contest... the mural was painted by me many years ago...
Date: 8/3/2017 6:07:00 PM
Beautiful write Eve,..and a very nice painting..
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/3/2017 8:16:00 PM
thank you , Joseph, I hope you write a poem for the contest... the mural was painted by me many years ago...
Date: 8/3/2017 4:40:00 PM
absolutely stunning Eve the picture is amazing and it shouts out for a romantic poem to be written about it :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2017 8:17:00 PM
thank you , Jan, I hope you write a poem for the contest...
Date: 8/3/2017 4:38:00 PM
This is very sweet Eve. Nicely written :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/3/2017 8:18:00 PM
thank you ,Heidi, I hope you write a poem for the contest... the mural was painted by me many years ago...

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