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She Searches

Sorrowing
she sadly searches
shards surface
soon
sedations sends
sin scurrying.

confusiondevotionfaithfamilyalliteration

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Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2010 at 10:18 PM

Yes a prime example of alliteration.AS you see, I am searching for poems of yours I have not yet seen. came across this cute little one. Let me find one more!

Michelle Norvell

January 23, 2010 at 6:19 PM

powerful words. love this. best to you....

Colleen Bono

January 10, 2010 at 11:57 AM

I posted a new poem.I think you will like it.Time For a Change.Hope all is well with you.

Constance La France

January 10, 2010 at 12:40 AM

I find this very vivid in its hidden message ..and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry.

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

January 9, 2010 at 7:17 AM

I love this poem. short but powerful. Makes you think to interpret. Nice. Thank you for welcoming me to poetrysoup. I did post more poems if you would like to read them. I value and appreciate your comments. Have a Great Day!

Tim Ryerson

January 8, 2010 at 3:13 PM

Wow, Debbie... You got me reading this baby more than once, THAT'S for sure!...'sedations sends sin scurrying'...let the reader interpret, huh?...powerful stuff, mon cher! - Tim