She Searches

Sorrowing
she sadly searches
shards surface
soon
sedations sends
sin scurrying.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/27/2010 10:18:00 PM
Yes a prime example of alliteration.AS you see, I am searching for poems of yours I have not yet seen. came across this cute little one. Let me find one more!
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Date: 1/23/2010 6:19:00 PM
powerful words. love this. best to you....
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:57:00 AM
I posted a new poem.I think you will like it.Time For a Change.Hope all is well with you.
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:40:00 AM
I find this very vivid in its hidden message ..and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry.
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Date: 1/9/2010 7:17:00 AM
I love this poem. short but powerful. Makes you think to interpret. Nice. Thank you for welcoming me to poetrysoup. I did post more poems if you would like to read them. I value and appreciate your comments. Have a Great Day!
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Date: 1/8/2010 3:13:00 PM
Wow, Debbie... You got me reading this baby more than once, THAT'S for sure!...'sedations sends sin scurrying'...let the reader interpret, huh?...powerful stuff, mon cher! - Tim
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Date: 1/8/2010 9:04:00 AM
Great job you've done here, Deborah! Have a very nice 2010! Your family name sounds Italian, am I right? Love, Gert
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Date: 1/7/2010 6:05:00 PM
The power of the letter 's' in a master's hand to convey such profound ponderings. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/6/2010 5:31:00 PM
Interesting S write that I could go several different ways. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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