She Rode the Train To Glory

She rode the train to glory,
Her star was shining throughout the territory, 
They called her the princess with red hair,
Her eyes were blue and skin so fair,
When she danced on stage the cowboys whistled,
While all the women folk bristled.

Her given name was Nancy Smith,
A plain-Jane name given by kith,
One day a broken mirror caught her beauty,
She then changed her name to Redonna Agouti,
Her hand-bills listed her as the dancing Italian,
A countess who two-stepped with the battalion.

Redonna's heart and soul was with dancing,
Her famous legs wouldn't quit prancing, 
She was the queen of the gaudy stage,
Wearing her purple plume in a suspended cage,
She caught the eye of a cowboy named Ranger,
She fell in love at first sight with this stranger.

He asked her to dance a waltz with him,
They kept dancing until the gaslights were dim,
Both of them were smitten with the love bug,
Before the night was over he gave her a hug,
Ranger proposed after the first kiss,
Redonna said yes since she was in bliss.

The Italian countess and cowboy were married,
For forty happy years until they were buried,
Their tombstones lay side-by-side,
With a drawing each of a groom and bride,
And her engraved inscription read, 
Nancy Smith Smith, Loving Wife of Ranger Smith.

She rode the train to glory...


November 10, 2017
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Subject:  (A) Love and Romance

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Date: 11/23/2017 2:25:00 AM
Another win with this great write! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful victory, Sonia - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 11/23/2017 5:51:00 AM
Gregory, thank you for the congratulations. I am truly humbled in the placement of my poem. Thank you for your support. ~ Sonia
Date: 11/21/2017 5:27:00 PM
you are a good story teller Sonia:-) :-) Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/21/2017 7:35:00 PM
Jan, thank you for your support. I enjoyed writing this poem which placed me in another time. Hugs, Sonia.
Date: 11/19/2017 10:07:00 PM
Fun imagery. Congrats on your win, Sonia.
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Date: 11/19/2017 10:29:00 PM
Line, thank you for your congratulations. Have a great Thanksgiving. ~ Sonia
Date: 10/5/2017 7:50:00 AM
What a wonderful story, and a fresh yet charmingly nostalgic take on the theme - loved it, Sonia! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)
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Date: 10/5/2017 10:36:00 AM
Gregory, you are so supportive. I sincerely appreciate your uplifting comment and encouragement. ~ Sonia
Date: 10/4/2017 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations Sonia on you fine win with this lovely poem.
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Date: 10/4/2017 10:08:00 PM
Susan, I am grateful for your congratulations. Thank you, Sonia.
Date: 10/4/2017 1:29:00 PM
Sonia, I love this story, congratulations on your win !
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Sonia Walker
Date: 10/4/2017 4:23:00 PM
Broken Wings, you are so kind. Thank you for the congratulations. ~ Sonia
Date: 10/4/2017 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sonia!
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:54:00 PM
Eve, thank you. Hugs, Sonia.
Date: 10/4/2017 7:02:00 AM
Great storytelling Sonia.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:43:00 AM
Silent One, thank you for the placement of my poem, 'She Rode the Train to Glory.' I am honored. Congratulations to the other placements and to you for hosting this successful and fun contest. Sincerely, Sonia.
Date: 4/7/2016 10:44:00 AM
Sonia, I looked up your poems; so far I've only read 'She Rode the Train to Glory', but I liked it a lot; I'm not a really big fan of narrative in poetry, but I liked this very much. Best to you...Ken
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Ken for your comment. Have a great day, Sonia.
Date: 4/6/2016 9:35:00 PM
Loved this poem, Sonia. Such a fun read...
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Date: 4/6/2016 10:07:00 PM
Edward, I appreciate your enthusiasm for this poem. Have a great week, Sonia
Date: 4/6/2016 8:33:00 PM
I love the cowboy style poetry because it is down to earth and humorous! Very nice; I enjoyed reading it because it was fun!:)
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Date: 4/6/2016 8:46:00 PM
Cheryl, thank you for enjoying 'She Rode the Train To Glory.' Nancy Smith Smith thanks you also. ~ Sonia
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