Premiere Contest Winnershe rises above

the pages of her life had flipped
from forth to back, an ironic trick

her body moved without a care
for she was strong and young and fair

stumbling betrayal brought her low
with faltering steps, she trembled so

frail twigs for legs, weak limbs for arms
she shook in great dismayed alarm

yet mind and spirit, strong as steel
would not give in to depression's zeal

she rose, determined, from her plight
with gift of song, her voice took flight

her music soars as she inspires
in her wheelchair among the choir




Written on 8/22/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sands Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 3:39 AM
Hi. I was led to your poems from your comment ...thank you . I absolutely love this inspirational poem. Congratulations :)
Negron Flores Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations Laura on the first placement of the contest
Leiser Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Thank you, Nayda :)
Moss Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 7:55 PM
She is inspirational, and so is your poem. Nicely done.
Leiser Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:34 PM
Thank you, Dalton. :)
La France Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:33 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem ~
Leiser Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Thank you for the placement, Constance! I really greatly appreciate it so much! :)
Leiser Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Afzal. I really appreciate it :)
Nusker Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 4:13 AM
Fabulously written. Congrats on your top placement.
Leiser Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 1:18 PM
I don't deserve such compliments, Connie. I admire your poetic prowess! Thank you for your kind comments :)
Leiser Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Afzal. I really appreciate it :)
Leiser Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Afzal. I really appreciate it :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 2:36 AM
It is talent like this that makes you a true poet Laura. This is a very beautiful story with such an inspiring ending. Congratulations on your deserving first place win! ; ) 7
Leiser Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:08 AM
I don't deserve such compliments, Connie. I admire your poetic prowess! Thank you for your kind comments :)
Leiser Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 8:58 AM
I don't deserve such compliments, Connie. I admire your poetic prowess! Thank you for your kind comments :)
Kannan Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:42 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win...Nicely done...
Leiser Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Thanks so much, Supraja :)
Raina Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Congratulations Laura on your first place...
Leiser Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 11:10 PM
Thank you, Meenakshi:)
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Very inspiring, well written poem Laura, congrats on your first place win!
Leiser Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Thank you, John :)
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Laura it truly is a wonderful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Thanks, Jan :)
Scars Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 4:20 PM
lovely Laura, congrats on your well deserved top placement! :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Such a lovely, uplifting poem, Laura, that sets a powerful example of true faith in oneself with the will to 'rise above'. Beautifully written, and best wishes for the 'couplet' contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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August 24, 2016 at 3:07 AM
inspiring write Laura, you say its your cousin which shows inspiration comes from those faced with difficulties of life who in God's grace show us an overcoming spirit. May God bless your cousin and you this day, have blessed day of grace, Gordon
Leiser Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Thank you, Gordon. Yes, my sweet cousin is an inspiration to me!
Mohn Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 4:35 PM
lovely on many levels Laura
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August 22, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Thank you, David.
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 4:19 PM
what beautiful inspirational uplifting write Laura - :-)The ending brought a lump to my throat:-) hugs Jan xx7
Leiser Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 4:21 PM
This is about my cousin Karen, who has MS, Jan. It is a true account...
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