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the pages of her life had flipped from forth to back, an ironic trick her body moved without a care for she was strong and young and fair stumbling betrayal brought her low with faltering steps, she trembled so frail twigs for legs, weak limbs for arms she shook in great dismayed alarm yet mind and spirit, strong as steel would not give in to depression's zeal she rose, determined, from her plight with gift of song, her voice took flight her music soars as she inspires in her wheelchair among the choir Written on 8/22/2016

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Date: 1/18/2018 3:39:00 AM
Hi. I was led to your poems from your comment ...thank you . I absolutely love this inspirational poem. Congratulations :)
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Date: 9/19/2016 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations Laura on the first placement of the contest
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/19/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thank you, Nayda :)
Date: 9/15/2016 7:55:00 PM
She is inspirational, and so is your poem. Nicely done.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/15/2016 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, Dalton. :)
Date: 9/14/2016 12:33:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem ~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2016 1:19:00 PM
Thank you for the placement, Constance! I really greatly appreciate it so much! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2016 1:18:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Afzal. I really appreciate it :)
Date: 9/14/2016 4:13:00 AM
Fabulously written. Congrats on your top placement.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2016 1:18:00 PM
I don't deserve such compliments, Connie. I admire your poetic prowess! Thank you for your kind comments :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Afzal. I really appreciate it :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Afzal. I really appreciate it :)
Date: 9/14/2016 2:36:00 AM
It is talent like this that makes you a true poet Laura. This is a very beautiful story with such an inspiring ending. Congratulations on your deserving first place win! ; ) 7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2016 9:08:00 AM
I don't deserve such compliments, Connie. I admire your poetic prowess! Thank you for your kind comments :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2016 8:58:00 AM
I don't deserve such compliments, Connie. I admire your poetic prowess! Thank you for your kind comments :)
Date: 9/14/2016 12:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win...Nicely done...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Supraja :)
Date: 9/13/2016 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on your first place...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/13/2016 11:10:00 PM
Thank you, Meenakshi:)
Date: 9/13/2016 5:18:00 PM
Very inspiring, well written poem Laura, congrats on your first place win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/13/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thank you, John :)
Date: 9/13/2016 5:02:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Laura it truly is a wonderful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/13/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thanks, Jan :)
Date: 9/13/2016 4:20:00 PM
lovely Laura, congrats on your well deserved top placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/24/2016 10:10:00 PM
Such a lovely, uplifting poem, Laura, that sets a powerful example of true faith in oneself with the will to 'rise above'. Beautifully written, and best wishes for the 'couplet' contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/24/2016 3:07:00 AM
inspiring write Laura, you say its your cousin which shows inspiration comes from those faced with difficulties of life who in God's grace show us an overcoming spirit. May God bless your cousin and you this day, have blessed day of grace, Gordon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/24/2016 10:47:00 AM
Thank you, Gordon. Yes, my sweet cousin is an inspiration to me!
Date: 8/22/2016 4:35:00 PM
lovely on many levels Laura
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/22/2016 4:46:00 PM
Thank you, David.
Date: 8/22/2016 4:19:00 PM
what beautiful inspirational uplifting write Laura - :-)The ending brought a lump to my throat:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/22/2016 4:21:00 PM
This is about my cousin Karen, who has MS, Jan. It is a true account...

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