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She Passes Me a Rose

"Last Night I dreamt"
I came "unglued"
"Entangled"
"Lost in the world of Lonely"

"Coming out of the shadows"
I viewed "a dozen roses multiplied"
I walked "through your garden"
Witnessed your "smile"
My "girl rising"
"Releasing the darker me"

You pass me a "lavender rose"
My "appreciation magnified"
"Pieces of me" realign
You have always been my "best medicine"
I awake "blanketed in joy"

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Donna Jones

Date: 9/9/2013 9:44:00 PM

Congrats Richard....well done....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2013 10:10:00 PM

Thanks Donna.

Colleen Bono

Date: 9/6/2013 10:53:00 AM

congrats to you. didnt place in this one. maybe next time. It gave me a challenge so that is all that matters. Good day to you, hugs, Colleen

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/6/2013 6:40:00 AM

This one has such beautiful imagery and the titles really make a captivating read. A very well deserved win :)

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/5/2013 8:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 6:04:00 AM

Thanks Danesh.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/5/2013 7:53:00 PM

just stopped by to say hello and congrats on your fine win :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2013 6:06:00 AM

Thanks Sandra it's appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2013 5:44:00 PM

Came to congratulate you. Yours was one that was truly among my favorites for this contest. I saw you had asked me questions below here in the comment i had made you previously. I have been here since 2010. I came a few weeks before that new year right before Xmas of '09. I think by now I have written well over 2,000 poems, but I think I have 1,500 or so posted!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 6:03:00 PM

Wow, that is a lot. I have written close to 600 since last October. This place is a constant source of inspiration. Thanks for answering and also for commenting.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/5/2013 3:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, as well, Richard! It was well deserved with this wonderful poem! Well done!...Thank you for the nice comments on my poem. It really means so much!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 3:37:00 PM

My pleasure Kelly.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2013 3:24:00 PM

another wonderful win... congratulations... Linda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 3:38:00 PM

Thanks again Linda.

Joseph May

Date: 9/5/2013 2:54:00 PM

wonderful write ....congrats on your win

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 3:06:00 PM

Thanks Joseph

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/5/2013 10:48:00 AM

Love how your titles tell a romantic dream....so beautiful and endearing! Big congrats Rick. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 3:07:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia

John Posey

Date: 9/5/2013 9:45:00 AM

Richard, Many thanks for all the things I've learned by reading your work. I am blushing at the thought the judges would rank my entry above yours... Humility envelopes my Congratulations... Respectfully... Jake

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 3:10:00 PM

You are kind Jake and I am happy to play second fiddle to your talented pen, enjoy the sweetness of your well deserved win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/5/2013 8:18:00 AM

A story told in titles......well done, Richard!! This is terrific! Congratulations!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 8:59:00 AM

Thanks Carrie

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/5/2013 7:48:00 AM

Just passing by to congratulate you on this amazing win! :) So happy to read your name on the winner's list. I always look for it. It's a beautiful poem....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 8:02:00 AM

Thanks Eileen, this was a fun one to write.

Skat A

Date: 9/5/2013 7:24:00 AM

Hi Richard, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 8:02:00 AM

Thanks SKAT

Colleen Bono

Date: 8/17/2013 10:42:00 AM

Did one for this contest to. Hope you have a great saturday. Love Colleen

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2013 10:50:00 AM

on my way Colleen.

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 8/17/2013 8:41:00 AM

Awake blanketed " blanketed in joy" these few words say how much joy you were in . Splendid poem. Richard, I posted one , I want to make it a Lyric how do I do that.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2013 10:46:00 AM

on my way to check it out.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/17/2013 7:26:00 AM

You took titles and wove them into a poetic tapestry. Love it.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2013 7:45:00 AM

Thanks Monterey.

Joseph May

Date: 8/17/2013 6:49:00 AM

nicely penned Richard....best wishes

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2013 6:51:00 AM

Thanks Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2013 10:24:00 PM

I'll try to remember to do that!! Maybe I should just make a copy of my list of titles!!! But I would have to use a lot of paper. haha. Have a good weekend. by the way, forgot to tell you. You posted this sweet love poem on the anniversary of me and Joe's!! (38 years, but I was just a teenager when we married. JK)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2013 6:36:00 AM

How long have you been on the soup? How many poems have you posted?