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She Opens Herself

She opens herself hesitantly, vulnerable, a child afraid to look under the bed, for fear of monsters. Her drunken soul spills sadness to the page, and secrets better left unsaid, yet I will not go there, I will not travel down the sultry road she's walking, I cannot breach her drunken vulnerability, I simply love her too much.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/29/2011 5:55:00 PM
Very awsome write, Ian
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Date: 6/29/2011 10:12:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ian. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 9:35:00 AM
A gentleman. Well written Ian Foley
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