She Misses the Sea

Once an ardent surfer, she’s called Marie,
living now land-locked, she misses the sea.
She mounts an ironing board,
as the room turns into fjord.
Hands stretched, she surfs on fantasy with glee.

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July 16. 2022
Syllable count : 10/10/7/7/10 (HMS)
Rhyme checked at RhymeZone.com
Contest : Limerick
Sponsored by : Lisa YY
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rose  Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 3:23 AM
She has the right idea S., beats ironing anytime. Congratulations dear poet on a job well done, !!!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. A  "Creative" write/story. In life, somethings you never forget. Have a great/blessed day.......................
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:43 AM
hank you Paula for your encouraging commennt.
Flood Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Nice one, Subimal. Congratulations. Terry
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:43 AM
Thank you, Terry for your appreciation.
Fowler Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations on your win Subimal! Linda
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:42 AM
thank you, Linda.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 4:11 AM
Perhaps she’s spritzing salt water around her. Congratulations!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:42 AM
Thank you Kim, for your comment. Yes, from the sea of fantasy.
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 5:35 AM
This is a very good take on the contest picture prompt, Subimal! Good luck in the contest! ~ Regards // paul
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:41 AM
Thank you, Paul for your appreciation.
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