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She Misses the Sea

Once an ardent surfer, she’s called Marie, living now land-locked, she misses the sea. She mounts an ironing board, as the room turns into fjord. Hands stretched, she surfs on fantasy with glee. _______________ July 16. 2022 Syllable count : 10/10/7/7/10 (HMS) Rhyme checked at RhymeZone.com Contest : Limerick Sponsored by : Lisa YY

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Date: 7/20/2022 3:23:00 AM
She has the right idea S., beats ironing anytime. Congratulations dear poet on a job well done, !!!
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Date: 7/19/2022 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A  "Creative" write/story. In life, somethings you never forget. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/20/2022 2:43:00 AM
hank you Paula for your encouraging commennt.
Date: 7/19/2022 6:08:00 AM
Nice one, Subimal. Congratulations. Terry
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/20/2022 2:43:00 AM
Thank you, Terry for your appreciation.
Date: 7/19/2022 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Subimal! Linda
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/20/2022 2:42:00 AM
thank you, Linda.
Date: 7/19/2022 4:11:00 AM
Perhaps she’s spritzing salt water around her. Congratulations!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/20/2022 2:42:00 AM
Thank you Kim, for your comment. Yes, from the sea of fantasy.
Date: 7/16/2022 5:35:00 AM
This is a very good take on the contest picture prompt, Subimal! Good luck in the contest! ~ Regards // paul
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/20/2022 2:41:00 AM
Thank you, Paul for your appreciation.

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