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She Makes Me

Sometimes in life it becomes stale or simply breaks Then we wonder if it's ever going to repair itself Do we battle on and pretend it's life's paths sake Or should we look inside us, why be left on a shelf It's the living in us that decides to let us awake Enjoy the breathing of living for unknown shall bring Around every corner there's one who'll make us sing I can only talk for I for it's a smile that awoke me For the seeing of she smiling that my heart now melts Never did I imagine that once again my eyes would see Every day we face whilst the cards of fate are dealt For tomorrows enthused my smile for now again I'm free Excitement in me abounds for it's soon that we'll meet At arrivals it shall be when her smile I'll greet On turning the corner the nerves I had now disperse My eyes in total focus on that smile now in my heart Her voice lovingly welcomes I, so beautifully versed This pretty poetess and I kiss, welcoming we start Soon by minutes, then loves depths shall be immersed Finally we've met, it's our breathing of living giving Soon our hands shall meet, touching rings now singing .

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Funom Makama

Date: 10/13/2015 7:40:00 AM

longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!

James Fraser
Date: 10/20/2015 3:14:00 PM

Thank you so much Funom. Your comments are welcomly encouraging, James :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/7/2015 9:58:00 AM

This is the first Ottave Rima I have read on PS. Great job. Very romantic and touching ... CayCay

James Fraser
Date: 10/20/2015 3:04:00 PM

It's a form new to me CayCay, but I love writing to this form. Thank you kindly for gracing my poetry page, James xx

Kim Van Breda

Date: 9/15/2015 1:17:00 PM

A very beautiful poem James... romance and emotion well expressed #7 ~~X~~

James Fraser
Date: 10/9/2015 2:09:00 PM

Thank you kindly Kim, much appreciated. Have a lovely weekend, James xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2015 6:34:00 PM

oooh, touching rings now, huh?? Your story reminds me of two friends I had at another poetry group. The woman was American and he was english. she had to wait two years to be with him because of some rules about immigration at that time. SEven years ago I recall they were so happily married. would love to know how they are doing now!!

James Fraser
Date: 10/9/2015 1:59:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Sometimes in life there are hurdles, if we can jump high enough, succeeding is possible, James :) :)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/14/2015 11:41:00 AM

A beautiful journey with such a happy ending/start.

James Fraser
Date: 9/14/2015 2:27:00 PM

Thank you kindly Tim, a beautiful journey with many destinations mapped out. Have a blessed week, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/11/2015 4:10:00 PM

I had a tear in my eye when i read this James its like a fairytale come true am so happy for you:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 9/14/2015 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Jan, at work I think of writing poems for Olive. This is one of them, hugs//James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/11/2015 3:57:00 PM

Huge One James, I remember the scene in #3 stanza so well.... all smiles.. =`) The first and second stanza this a reality I can say that at some point in our life we experience such and well the thought of not giving up and discovering there is still that hope...and we try move on... =`) warm tight hugsxxx~Olive Eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/13/2015 3:35:00 AM

We have shared lots before we meet and more after... I learned lots from you. I am so glad that God gave us that chance to meet regardless how we will end... but wow we need not speak much for our hearts shared the heat and beat... I long to share more with you... hugs!!!thanks much for the effort... all i can say is thank you and soon........~Your little one, Olive ELoisaxxx