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She Makes Me

Sensuous posture
Hungered zest
Erogenous zones

Magical quest
Amorous advances
Kissing allover
Erotically entwined
Sexually blessed

Making love is their wanting desire
Enriching in join, releasing their fire

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Nitesh Aggarwal

Date: 5/27/2010 1:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 5/26/2010 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest, James. This is a magnificent Acrostic full of sensuality and passion. May you have many more. Thanks for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day with your loved ones. God bless and smile. Kindest Regards, Andrew.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2010 4:06:00 PM

ok, that's about twelve, and now I am starting to open lots of poems of yours I have already commented to, thereby making it look like more and more people are reading your poetry. hahaha. What a system this is! Luv, andrea

Joe Flach

Date: 5/20/2010 5:29:00 PM

Nicely done James. Any time you can work "erogenous zones" into a poem how can you go wrong? Congrats on your placement in the contest. Joe

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 2:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM with this "hot" one! LUv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2010 10:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest James. Love,Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/20/2010 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Great poem. Love, Joyce

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/19/2010 6:11:00 PM

this very romantic. i love your poem here. a love with the most passionate desire is a blissful place and thing to have. lovely wirte. amazing<3 &thanks -Always&Forever Lynette