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She Loves Jewellery

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She has a collection, an unusual collection, Of four thousand and forty two, Colourful, shapely, dangly rings, From green to gold to blue, That she wears from ears, her nose, her lips, The ones that are on show, And she wears a heap in other places, But there I will not go, Her arms both glitter, her legs glisten, Her neck’s a twinkle on display, She’s a shiny beautiful colourful star, When she walks throughout the day, From hoops, to drops, to barbell hugs, She loves wearing tiny rocks, But no one can actually see her now, She’s become a walking jewellery box.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/15/2018 4:52:00 AM
nice write!have a great day
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Date: 8/10/2018 7:05:00 AM
This went straight to my FAVS list.
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Date: 8/10/2018 2:56:00 AM
Oh this rocks Lewis lol! loved your humourous write I can picture it so well:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/9/2018 10:11:00 PM
I can see her...glittering all over...Nice imagery and style...All the best
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Date: 8/9/2018 9:42:00 PM
Oh. I love it! Giggles and glitz, it's going in my fave bits ;) xomo!
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