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She loves cool, crisp breezes along the shore Warm smiles and rom-coms she's cried to before She loves fall, dogs and biking Babies, laughter and hiking But somehow, she doesn't love me anymore Written 10/17/22

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Valsa George

Date: 10/19/2022 10:03:00 PM

So sad... ! Make yourself lovable, Robert .... :)

Robert Gorelick
Date: 10/20/2022 2:27:00 PM

But I am loveable, Valsa! Still, I'll take your advice.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/19/2022 7:46:00 PM

Lovely heartfelt poetry Robert. Love how you used the love in the beginning and then the contrast at the end shocking the reader. Clever play on words. Love the twist at the end my friend...

Robert Gorelick
Date: 10/20/2022 2:29:00 PM

Perceptive comment, thank you, so glad you enjoyed!

Deb M

Date: 10/19/2022 5:36:00 PM

Oh Robert….i do hope this is fiction as its so very beautiful and sad! Debx

Robert Gorelick
Date: 10/20/2022 2:31:00 PM

Fiction based on fact, as is for so many of us! Thanks for your concern, Robert

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/19/2022 3:50:00 PM

Dear Robert, such a tender piece in Limerick form! I really enjoyed reading your poem, and thought a lot about it - there must be an interesting story behind your verse. Warm wishes ~ Mala

Robert Gorelick
Date: 10/20/2022 2:34:00 PM

Hello Malabika, a quote from Paul McCartney; Love has a nasty habit of disappearing over night! I'm subject to heartbreak like everyone else. Best to you! Robert

Jim Slaughter

Date: 10/19/2022 2:09:00 PM

I like this piece a lot, Robert...as poignant as it is. The human heart has an infinite capacity to love, I believe, but that doesn't necessarily also include constancy.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 10/20/2022 2:35:00 PM

Yes indeed! Love can be very volatile. Thanks, Jim!