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She Loves

She loves cool, crisp breezes along the shore
Warm smiles and rom-coms she's cried to before
She loves fall, dogs and biking
Babies, laughter and hiking
But somehow, she doesn't love me anymore

Written 10/17/22

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Valsa George October 19, 2022 at 10:03 PM So sad... ! Make yourself lovable, Robert .... :) Robert Gorelick October 20, 2022 at 2:27 PM But I am loveable, Valsa! Still, I'll take your advice.

Michael Tor October 19, 2022 at 7:46 PM Lovely heartfelt poetry Robert. Love how you used the love in the beginning and then the contrast at the end shocking the reader. Clever play on words. Love the twist at the end my friend... Robert Gorelick October 20, 2022 at 2:29 PM Perceptive comment, thank you, so glad you enjoyed!

Deb M October 19, 2022 at 5:36 PM Oh Robert….i do hope this is fiction as its so very beautiful and sad! Debx Robert Gorelick October 20, 2022 at 2:31 PM Fiction based on fact, as is for so many of us! Thanks for your concern, Robert

Malabika Ray Choudhury October 19, 2022 at 3:50 PM Dear Robert, such a tender piece in Limerick form! I really enjoyed reading your poem, and thought a lot about it - there must be an interesting story behind your verse. Warm wishes ~ Mala Robert Gorelick October 20, 2022 at 2:34 PM Hello Malabika, a quote from Paul McCartney; Love has a nasty habit of disappearing over night! I'm subject to heartbreak like everyone else. Best to you! Robert

Jim Slaughter October 19, 2022 at 2:09 PM I like this piece a lot, Robert...as poignant as it is. The human heart has an infinite capacity to love, I believe, but that doesn't necessarily also include constancy. Robert Gorelick October 20, 2022 at 2:35 PM Yes indeed! Love can be very volatile. Thanks, Jim!