She Left Him

Devastation, destruction, emptiness, void.
Words that describe the state he's left in. 
The love of his life left. 
She left suddenly, words were not exchanged
Words were never shared between the two,
Never shared before that 'time'.
That 'time' that every being shares. 

That 'time' when air stops flowing.
That 'time' when life leaves the body.
Words of importance were never shared before 
that 'time'. 
It kills him, it pierces deep to the core.
He saw your face without motion; without glow
That image is embedded in his mind. 

He misses you, he misses you very much. 
The life he's in doesn't seem real. 
The life he lives now is surreal. 
A terrible heart wrenching dream,
He wishes would end.

He doesn't believe his moma left him, 
Left him so quickly, so suddenly. 

He misses you, he misses you very much.

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Date: 3/9/2015 4:19:00 PM
Lajorne, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Date: 1/25/2015 12:18:00 AM
LAJORNE, always pleased to read every entry on any contest list. Congratulations on your HM. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/17/2014 10:27:00 PM
A very deep emotional wriye Lajorne! congrats on merited win!
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Lajorne Ferguson
Date: 11/15/2014 10:11:00 PM
Thank you for reading, i appreciate it very much.
Date: 7/17/2014 9:12:00 AM
A powerful write!!! Congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 7/16/2014 5:58:00 PM
Lajorne, Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/27/2014 2:24:00 PM
Woah! Those last lines surprised me! So much soul and raw emotion!
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Lajorne Ferguson
Date: 11/15/2014 10:13:00 PM
Thank youu!!
Date: 6/18/2014 4:12:00 AM
How sad. Losing a parent is hard, whatever your age. Your poem illustrates that we must communicate with those we love, and tell them just that - we love them before it's too late. Life goes on, the pain lessens, but we never forget. Shirley x
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Lajorne Ferguson
Date: 11/15/2014 10:12:00 PM
Difficulties reside, yes. Thank you. Xx
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