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She Is What Love Is Premiere Contest Winner

The naked skyline falls into a quiet darkness, slick sidewalks and flickering street lights bid farewell as I enter the elevator to her loft, fifth floor My day was long, but worth it, she makes it worth it The hallway is silent… I knock lightly, no answer, letting myself in I see her through the open glass doors I let her hear my footsteps… a slow drizzle shimmers on the big city Her perfume tempts my senses as she peers from the balcony’s iron rail into the vast cavern of sleeping buildings… like a rose petal hourglass She feels me…closer…her black dress and red heels against the dark backdrop of dreary skies silhouette her beauty, she is a poem waiting to be read, a song you can’t get out of your head or would want to I place my arms about her waist, she turns, moist ruby lips infectious, eyes hiding her story find mine, the rain falling like diamond tear drops decorates her cheeks as she smiles and my heart is flooded with light We embrace, a deep passionate kiss, locked in haunting silence speaking louder than any words, all that was cold becomes warm as moisture seeps, dampening my skin, and I don’t care She is what love is… a hot cup of coffee on a cold winter day, a cool breeze in the middle of August, a beautiful delicate flower blooming from a crack in the asphalt on that long, endless highway of life…and she is mine

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Date: 12/22/2016 6:43:00 AM
"she is a poem waiting to be read,"// a song you can’t get out of your head// or would want to//...sigh... so beautiful
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thank so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 12/20/2016 7:35:00 AM
Great write Chris! congratulations on the win. ...Fran
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2016 8:01:00 AM
Thanks so very much Fran. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 12/19/2016 9:03:00 AM
Elegant romantic words at their finest! Great poem...top shelf! Congrats on your win, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so very much Laura, I am thrilled you liked this one
Date: 12/18/2016 1:22:00 AM
Truly a winner. That last stanza particularly. Congrats, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thank you so very much Tamal
Date: 12/17/2016 8:00:00 PM
This is beautiful, Chris! I am so glad the contest led me here, this gem should not fall through the cracks - no way. How great the emotion and imagery is - this is indeed a winner and I sincerely congratulate you on First Place! CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thank you CayCay for always leaving such kind words for me. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 12/17/2016 4:03:00 PM
Excellent Chris - well deserved win! :-)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:35:00 AM
Thanks so very much Mark.
Date: 12/17/2016 8:38:00 AM
Wow, this was magnifique, classic surely your best yet, no wonder it took top honors!A7
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:35:00 AM
Thanks so much John. I am glad you liked this one.
Date: 12/17/2016 8:16:00 AM
You are a real romantic, Chris:) well deserved top win, congratulations:)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so very much Jo for your kind words.
Date: 12/17/2016 4:16:00 AM
Awww Chris, so deserved to win! Awesome :) That last stanza is to die for!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so very much Darren, I am so happy you liked this one. I appreciate your kindness
Date: 12/16/2016 9:03:00 PM
This is fantastic, Chris. A totally well deserved win. I LOVE it.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so very much Andrea, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. It is my personal favorite
Date: 12/16/2016 3:50:00 PM
This is so romantic and beautiful... I can't really say much more than what has already been expressed here by others. I'm so happy to see this won top honor.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 4:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much Rebecca, coming from a poet that I so admire, your words mean a lot to me. I appreciate all of your kindness.
Date: 12/16/2016 12:27:00 PM
Chris. Congrats on your top placement. Truly, an absolute masterpiece. Blessings.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 12:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much Curtis
Date: 12/16/2016 11:27:00 AM
A beautiful picture of love! Congratulations, Chris! 7+
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim.
Date: 12/16/2016 10:56:00 AM
great write reads like a chapter out of a book carrys you along stephen
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thanks so very much Stephen.
Date: 12/16/2016 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations Chris, a wonderful read.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Gary
Date: 12/16/2016 9:54:00 AM
Chris, congratulations on your very best very elegant
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 9:56:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 10/21/2016 11:59:00 PM
Yes this is great, you took me there. Didnt mean to be a voyeur but I was there! The validate code for this comment is appropriate too ;)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 8:27:00 AM
Thanks so very much Grant. I'd be curious to know what that validate code was.
Date: 10/21/2016 12:21:00 PM
I'm positive I left a review here earlier. Utterly and enchantingly romantic! Oh my, I'm short of breath, your poetic brilliance makes me sigh heavily Chris. That last verse is golden, not just romance, but the little things that matter in a lasting relationship.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2016 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so very much Paloma for your kind words. I am happy this one touched you in that way. This is one of my faves as well.
Date: 10/21/2016 12:06:00 PM
So poetic, Chris. Beautifully penned! She sounds like trouble. Lol
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Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2016 3:37:00 PM
She very well could be Daniel, but worth every bit of it. : ) Thanks my friend for reading and commenting on my poem.
Date: 10/21/2016 11:56:00 AM
Alluring and endearing and breathtakingly beautiful..Still love that cup of coffee line the most.Afave.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2016 3:37:00 PM
Thanks again Charmaine for coming back to read my second helping. :) I am happy you enjoyed this again.

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