She is the First Great Experiment

She is the first great experiment
   of the universe, 
     and of my life:
     to release the only one
        so that she may become the many.

No longer one thing, she becomes
   everything.
      And thus I may wander everywhere
         in my being
            through an emptiness of space
               in the alwaysness
                  of her.

Once I was fortune's favorite
   on hand for hours of discovery.
      Now I am crowned
         with perfection.

Once there with her, now 
   here with her
      releasing myself
         into the infinity
            of love.

Christopher M. Swan, "Song of Susan," 2008
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February 21, 2026 at 7:03 PM
This is beautiful
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