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She Hasn'T Left Me Yet

I remember when youth felt forever,
for I didn't understand grown-up things.
And I spent all of my time playing games,
dreaming of magical dragons with wings.

Yet in the blink of an eye my life changed,
with a glancing gentle touch of her hand.
For I felt feelings never felt before,
it was serendipitous, nothing planned.

It was like a veil suddenly lifted,
what was once invisible, became clear.
And I noticed the beauty of her eyes,
followed by her shy smile that drew me near.

I felt compelled to try and steal a kiss,
for passion's burning flame had ignited.
Yet my heart was beating frantically,
fearing my move may not be invited.

I decide to throw caution to the wind,
take a gamble and pursue my sweet prize.
For despite the hopes of a clumsy teen, 
love chooses the moment innocence dies.

She warmly welcomed my impromptu kiss,
moaning passionately as our lips met.
And I instantly knew we'd wed, it’s been 
forty years and she hasn't left me yet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 6:03 AM
Wow! I love the story itself as well as the way you've written this, Emile. A 7 . Congratulations on your win! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading.
Pinet Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Thanks so much Kim, I appreciate your taking the time for a friendly visit, your comments are appreciated. Emile.
Maverick Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 4:58 PM
Good to read this Emile, and congratulations on the H M..'
Pinet Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Thanks Joe, I appreciate your support. Emile.
A  Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 9:29 AM
EMILE:) Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. That was nice of Justin------ Forever *SKAT*
Pinet Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Neels Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 9:44 AM
What a gem this is Emile ;) awesome to be still together after all this time.. lovely write to read on this quiet Sunday afternoon ;)
Pinet Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 11:47 AM
Thanks Wilma, I appreciate both your comments and your support. Emile.
Muideen Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 11:18 PM
WoW! What a great and lovely poem! it romantic and interesting.....excellent write.....7! And a fav.
Pinet Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Das Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 12:51 PM
Not yet, nor ever...wishing you many years of togetherness...sweet undying love...7
Pinet Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 1:58 PM
Thanks Nandita, sometimes one can get lucky in love and it lasts a lifetime, that's what happened to me. Emile.
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