She Gathered Roses

~
She gathered roses,
one at a time,
choosing carefully,
for you see, they were her healing

A light breeze tickled her hair
as a brief smile curved upon her soft lips
The sun, bright on this day was a welcome diversion
from the clouds that followed in her mind

Life was green in this meadow
and she enjoyed the green as it flowed
as far as her eyes could see,
snipping yet another pink rose

Not everything was beautiful in her world
but the roses spoke to her, delicate whispers
telling her she was special and that even a thorn
drawing blood could feel good once the pain had subsided

She had touched many thorns in her life,
the scars though faded still decorated her in guilt
A butterfly caught her glimpse, wings of black and blue,
once her colors, now another slice of nature’s wonder

This butterfly was her and she knew it,
free to move about the petals as she pleased
Happily greeting each bloom, caressing the textures
within the safety of her garden

She gathered roses,
one at a time,
choosing carefully
for you see they were her… 

healing
~

8/21/19
For the: Wow Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nina Parmenter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Jones Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 11:48 PM
This one enjoys with a cup of tea in a nice quiet garden. Is a very relaxing poem as was her garden for her.
Green Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:44 PM
Glad you liked it Karen.
Pathak Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 1:19 AM
Yes, it creates a wow moment, and congrats for POD.
Green Avatar
October 9, 2019 at 8:56 AM
Thank you so much.
Wood Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 12:37 PM
So Glad to see you are back in the Soup Chris. This poem is wonderful. A Fav! Regards, Dean
Green Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 1:17 PM
Thank you so very much Dean. It is good to be back.
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September 12, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Wow. Beautiful.
Green Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Thank you so much Heather. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Chircop Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 3:47 PM
How lovely..How beautiful...and originally penned...Chris.
Green Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Well hi there my friend. What a wonderful surprise to see your beautiful comments on my poetry. What a wonderful surprise to see you period. How have you been? I have missed you.
Bohto Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 1:53 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem for I have succumbed to the season of writers block...……. The Season of Healing
Green Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Hey there Holly Botto, long time no see. I'm happy you stopped by and liked this one so much. Hope your pen starts flowing again soon
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Chris! So happy to know your here!
Green Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Thank you so much Kim. It's nice to be here. : )
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Hello Chris, I can picture her picking roses for her healing. Roses a re beautiful no matter what color they are. Have a nice day my friend.Peace ,Love, Joy.
Green Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 1:27 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene.
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 3:27 PM
I see you got POTD, WAY TO GO. I was wondering if this were the one also for Eleanor Rigby. You did not say the title of that one. I will look around a bit to see~! And I am wondering if you won Nina's contest with this. If you didn't, then I can understand why mind did not have a chance in hell!
Green Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your visit today. Nope, didn't win but that is ok, the poem that did was wonderful. And my Eleanor Rigby poem was titled, "Look at her smile" (I think) : )
Hamilton Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 9:37 AM
Congrats for POTD I missed that somehow, also #2 on the top 100, a great poem getting the recognition it deserves,well done dear poet!
Green Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 10:14 AM
Thanks so much John. I think it is just a surge since I have been away for a while but it was a very nice welcome back.
Capitano Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 2:37 PM
Great work Chris, love the use of butterflies and roses. Congrats.
Green Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Thanks so much Phil
Messina Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 6:22 AM
This is great Chris. Congrats on POTD!
Green Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 6:55 AM
Thanks so much Charles
Lamoureux Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 9:06 PM
A wow worthy win!
Green Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 6:55 AM
Thanks so much Richard
Awtry Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 4:00 PM
there is such lightness, freedom, and gentleness in this poem! Certainly a Wow! Congratulations for your many honors !
Green Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much for your kind thoughts.
Chiri Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 11:29 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
Green Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Thank you Brenda
Ashley Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 7:20 PM
The outpouring of emotional imagery and metaphorical beauty flow freely from your poetic pen, Chris. Exquisite and moving poetry. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Green Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Susan for your kindness and beautiful comment on my poem. I am happy you liked it.
Mcgee Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 12:52 PM
A beauty among the roses...congrats on POTD. Best wishes, Jeanne
Mcgee Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 7:15 PM
And congrats on your win in the contest too!
Green Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you so very much Jeanne
Gondolf Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 4:28 AM
It’s an ingredient we all need, Arturo, congrats on POTD. John
Green Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 7:22 AM
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment John. I appreciate it.
Kitchin Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 6:42 PM
Congratulations on POTD with your powerfully written poem, a well deserved honor!
Green Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Thank you so very much Tania. I am excited you liked this one
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 5:37 PM
Well count me WOWED Chris!!! Having her identify with the black and blue in these lines "A butterfly caught her glimpse, wings of black and blue, once her colors, now another slice of nature’s wonder" was simply brilliant and very moving Chris. So many woman are battered and in fear of their life if they leave. This incredible poem is going into my Faves! I love the entire poem and it is so deserving of POTD! Congratulations my friend. xxoo : )
Green Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Thank you so very much Connie. You are the first one to understand the black and blue aspect of this piece. (or the first one to mention it) Thank you so much for that. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful comment
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August 22, 2019 at 3:52 PM
I got chills reading this, Chris, especially the part where you describe the good feeling that comes after the cut of a thorn heals. Quite profound! And I think we can see our loved ones in butterflies and other animals. When this happens, I think we're reaching out to them. You surely created the "Wow" factor and I think Nina will love your entry. Winning wishes for you. Hugs, Carolyn
Green Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Thank you Carolyn for always showing me such kindness. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. I appreciate your visits always.
Nicole Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Petals of Pink! There is something mesmerizing about such a color. Perhaps, because it is a favorite of mine. "She gathered roses" as it made her feel special. She is amazing!!! Because of her heart. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Green Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Thank you Brandy. Thank you for always being so kind to me. Your comment today has made me smile.
Doll Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 1:19 PM
The healing restorative power of nature is so well expressed in your poem. Congratulations on POTD, Chris. Best Wishes~ Warren
Green Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Thank you so much Warren. I am happy you liked it.
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Unlike Gertrude Stein's roses, these are very special. Congratulations on POTD, Chris! Warm wishes, Gershon
Green Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate your kind thoughts today.
Chiri Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 12:04 PM
I see congrats are in order for potd !;)
Green Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Brenda. I appreciate your kindness.
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