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She Earned Them

She was a young bride and knew no different It started with unkind words and grew to cruel besmirch She thought she was unworthy and deserved such throes upon her Barely even noticed how gradually he’d clipped her pinion To keep her bound a prisoner and never set her free He made sure she’d know nothing of flying high and fancy free The beatings kept coming till her lissome body Could take no more - ‘twas only then she found repose In a wooden box face toward the firmament sojourn serene and brand new angel wings AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on May 28, 2018 for contest EIGHT-WORD CHALLENGE 4 sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 6/9/2018 11:07:00 PM
Very touching, congratulations Line, a super win. Mick
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Date: 6/9/2018 11:41:00 PM
Thank you, Mick. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/5/2018 2:58:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win with such a touching verse.
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Date: 6/5/2018 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/4/2018 11:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this tragic but well-written poem. And it still happens...
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Date: 6/5/2018 6:39:00 AM
Hard to believe. Thanks for your lovely visit, Susan.
Date: 6/4/2018 7:47:00 PM
Great use of the 8 words and, Line, with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/4/2018 8:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/4/2018 2:55:00 PM
A well crafted poem Line..but a sad ending....Congrats on your win
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 8:20:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Joseph.
Date: 6/4/2018 2:21:00 PM
So much pain and tragedy, lovingly expressed - congratulations on your placement-
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Date: 6/4/2018 2:30:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/4/2018 11:13:00 AM
Such a sad but brilliant write Line, congrats on a top placement!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/29/2018 1:44:00 PM
Sad but true in so many of our societies; the only escape is the next plane.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/29/2018 4:12:00 PM
Inconceivable! Some people have such a miserable life while we are so fortunate. There is no such thing as fairness in this realm.
Date: 5/28/2018 11:50:00 PM
Nicely penned, Line. A sad tale, vibrant.
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Date: 5/29/2018 6:57:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated visit and comment.

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