Richard Lamoureux Poet Terzanelle

She Dreams of Him

Your mind has designed the perfect lover
That sensitive man of your special dreams
You wait for him to rip off the covers

Late night dinning with kisses and moon beams
You are awake and still dreaming of him
That sensitive man of your special dreams

Alone in the night the lights grow dim
Thinking about love and what it all means
You are awake and still dreaming of him

Real life may not always be filled with steam
You try to be thankful but it seems hard
Thinking about love and what it all means

With imagination you play the card
Even though you're aware it isn't real
You try to be thankful but it seems hard

In the end you can't help how you feel
Even though you're aware it isn't real
Your mind has designed the perfect lover
You wait for him to rip off the covers

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Freddie Robinson Jr. November 17, 2016 at 10:07 AM Very sensual romantic poem, Richard. I loved it so much. You can really do those terzanelle poems. A gorgeous poem really. Love always.

Eileen Manassian April 16, 2015 at 10:14 PM Dreams are only dreams, Richard. They become reality for some. Lovely write...Hugs Richard Lamoureux April 17, 2015 at 7:42 AM Thanks Eileen, hugs back.

Robin Davis March 5, 2014 at 8:48 AM Richard What a wonderfully portrayed picture of how fantasies can keep us full of hope and faith. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Mamma Bear poem Richard Lamoureux March 5, 2014 at 9:34 AM My pleasure Robin.

Betty Hunter February 25, 2014 at 4:10 AM That was excellent! I enjoyed the imagination,creativity and excitement of the poem. Bravo! Richard Lamoureux February 25, 2014 at 8:45 AM Thanks Betty.

Cecilia Macfarlane March 5, 2013 at 6:57 PM If only what we imagine could become a reality....excellent write! Hugs Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2013 at 5:30 AM Sometimes what we imagine does become Reality. Hugs back.

Eileen Manassian March 3, 2013 at 3:17 AM A 7...and into my favorites! Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2013 at 6:08 AM Thanks

Yanny Widjanarko March 2, 2013 at 9:07 AM Wow, your Terzanelle never failed in fascinating people Rick, two thumbs up! :D enjoy my read tonight - hug, Yanny Richard Lamoureux March 2, 2013 at 10:11 PM Thanks Yanny, I have wireless here in Mexico so I can keep in contact as well as do som writing.

Irfana Ali Bhat March 2, 2013 at 7:13 AM this is a poem everyone can relate to....no matter what we have in real life,our fantasies r more intriguing.....beautifully penned...loved it...:))) Irfana Ali Bhat March 3, 2013 at 6:59 AM doing fine....living in an uncertain world...wt to do?? we just learn to live with it...:)) Richard Lamoureux March 2, 2013 at 7:50 AM Irfana it is so nice to receive a visit from you. How have you been?

Harry Horsman March 1, 2013 at 2:46 PM yes i have to agree with Eileen below, the flow of this gem, is amazing... Richard Lamoureux March 1, 2013 at 8:38 PM Plenty a thunder for all. I like when people are comfortable to engage in casual conversation. Richard Lamoureux March 1, 2013 at 8:37 PM Thanks Harry. Eileen Manassian March 1, 2013 at 3:27 PM Harry! :) Glad you agree my dear! How are you??? ;) Ok...won't steal Richard's thunder here!

Eileen Manassian March 1, 2013 at 2:41 PM The inspiration for this write must have been quite intense because it is seamless....It just flows...no pauses, no uncertain moments, no what ifs....it is all there and it is absolutely beautiful! Great write, Richard! Richard Lamoureux March 1, 2013 at 8:37 PM I rarely know where a piece will go until I get going. Thanks for your kind words. I am now off to pack for our trip. Horray!

Sara Kendrick March 1, 2013 at 1:45 PM Cute one ..I got a chuckle..Life issues some wild cards sometimes..If this is for a contest, it should be a winner in my book..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence was vey uplifting..Sara Richard Lamoureux March 1, 2013 at 8:39 PM Your welcome Sarah always a pleasure.

Audrey Haick March 1, 2013 at 10:30 AM You've written this Terzannelle very well Richard and the content is wonderfully thought out and presented. Enjoyed! Always, Annalise Richard Lamoureux March 1, 2013 at 11:32 AM Thanks Annalise, your presence is a fresh breath of air.

Russell Sivey March 1, 2013 at 7:23 AM This is a tremendous and special write my friend! I am enthralled by the splendor of this incredible poem Richard! What a fabulous piece, quite the lovely poem, Great Work!! Richard Lamoureux March 1, 2013 at 7:28 AM Thanks Russell!