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She Dances

She dances she glances pirouettes in the rain beyond her shoulder a turtle dove sits posed She peers inside the water, a reflection of the self looking back into time, for it is then that she espied her beautiful smile intact upon a baby bird who couldn't fly She poses in the mirrored lake, its a looking glass of sort.

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Date: 7/7/2023 12:52:00 PM
Very thought provoking, especially 'beautiful smile intact upon a baby bird who couldn't fly' - feels like the beginning of growth or possibility in that line~
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Date: 7/7/2023 4:37:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Michelle, glad you enjoyed the poem :)
Date: 7/5/2023 11:15:00 PM
Lovely poem Rose….Debx
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Date: 7/7/2023 4:37:00 PM
Thank you Deb for reading and responding :)

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