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She Dances

“She dances she glances Beyond her shoulder She peers Looking back Her beautiful smile She poses in the mirror” She sings voice rings Ripples in air She endears Ballerina steps Enticed by melody She dances with angelic flair

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/15/2023 10:52:00 AM

Your dance resonates throughout Subimal. Congratulations! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/14/2023 8:29:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. I love your ending, "She dances with angelic flair." Have a blessed weekend writing away.............

Eve Roper

Date: 6/18/2023 9:05:00 PM

love the verse, Subimal. The contest rules confuse me because they're asking for only 20 words and the verse to add has 19.. Good luck in the contest.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/18/2023 10:55:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. The contest rule says 20 words at the most. So 19 seems OK.