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She Craved

She Craved For the beast. Amidst his lair In candle surround, Ripped white linen clings As their sweated bodies writhe. In unification, his seed Shall spawn the beginning of the dark. Whilst his translucent shadows walk earths light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/8/2010 10:46:00 AM
Dark and intriguing poem, James. Sapwning "the beginning of dark" would be the result of an encounter with a beast from Haydes. Excellent etheree and you have my best wishes for the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:56:00 PM
Hey, how are you? Enjooyed reading your works today!
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:15:00 PM
The candle, the white linen.sweat, seed..its like a real good movie..love it James. BG
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Date: 6/7/2010 2:50:00 PM
A wonderful Etheree James and good luck in Andrea's contest with this raw energy exuding from your magnificent words... my kinda poetry.. good luck... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/7/2010 2:18:00 PM
This form is a new one to me. Great job, rich in imagery and dark atmosphere ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/7/2010 2:10:00 PM
very nice and interesting write, enjoyed.p.d.
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