She Breaks

Neon billboards scream a symphony of 
images
in attempts to sell
happiness
by bleeding dissatisfaction into her mind.

Glossy, crisp pages remind her that she isn't 
good enough
to be accepted by a 
society
that values celebrity over individuality. 

Reflections in the mirror only
reinforce
her perceived
inadequacies
as mascara stains her fair cheeks. 

The gears of discontentment crush
us all
and in our attempts to
rebuild ourselves
we realize just how broken we are. 

But there exists a deeper truth:

Within our eternal
soul 
is a beauty that no amount of make up can hide.

8.30.18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 10:00 PM
A beautifully conveyed and deeply meaningful poem, Jesse. Congratulations on your excellent win. ~Susan
Faulkner Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Beautiful, especially the closing lines, congratulations!
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 11:30 AM
So well done Jesse, enjoyed very much, congrats on another win!
Lindley Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Love it.. Perfect closing and a very important message to convey! A fav my friend.. a gem ...
Kiser Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Well said, Sir. A beautiful poem.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Wonderful piece Jesse :) xomo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 1:18 PM
That certainly would (maybe even should;)
Rowe Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thank you, Maureen. I'm finding that having a (now) teenage daughter changes my perception of things.
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