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She Breaks

Neon billboards scream a symphony of images in attempts to sell happiness by bleeding dissatisfaction into her mind. Glossy, crisp pages remind her that she isn't good enough to be accepted by a society that values celebrity over individuality. Reflections in the mirror only reinforce her perceived inadequacies as mascara stains her fair cheeks. The gears of discontentment crush us all and in our attempts to rebuild ourselves we realize just how broken we are. But there exists a deeper truth: Within our eternal soul is a beauty that no amount of make up can hide. 8.30.18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/2/2018 10:00:00 PM
A beautifully conveyed and deeply meaningful poem, Jesse. Congratulations on your excellent win. ~Susan
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Date: 10/1/2018 2:57:00 PM
Beautiful, especially the closing lines, congratulations!
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:30:00 AM
So well done Jesse, enjoyed very much, congrats on another win!
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Date: 9/6/2018 7:47:00 AM
Love it.. Perfect closing and a very important message to convey! A fav my friend.. a gem ...
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Date: 8/30/2018 12:16:00 PM
Well said, Sir. A beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/30/2018 9:31:00 AM
Wonderful piece Jesse :) xomo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/30/2018 1:18:00 PM
That certainly would (maybe even should;)
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/30/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen. I'm finding that having a (now) teenage daughter changes my perception of things.

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