She Ate My Aching

she ate my aching
sweet tender sushi
sea

I am her loving
worshiped lunch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Boddie Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 3:52 PM
from the eyes of the meal....this has great appeal....and a delicacy such as this....is just too sweet to resist....;)
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August 5, 2015 at 4:14 PM
Why, thank you, sir, for your charming couplets! They were a nice way to begin my day. (I can rhyme, too :)
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