She and He

she sauntered around - up the greenest hill he happily joined her, learning anew she always stayed healthy, he often ill - Proteas on Drakensberg Mountain, pink hue he failed to see pink, tinges of red, blue she could talk a prayer, God and nations he heard her, meandering around his pains he could not forget his failed marriage, ex she seemed blessed with many sing-song refrains he, surfeit within with love, needs, regrets

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/28/2022 7:02:00 AM

Dear Poet, I am new to your page. This is the first poem I chose to read. What I understand - she and he, although opposites, compliment each other, as usually in reality happens. Thank you for dropping by and reading my humble poem - I am touched that my poem reminded you of your mother. Best wishes ~ Mala

Anil Deo
Date: 3/28/2022 8:34:00 PM

ThanX Mala Ji

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/24/2022 2:38:00 PM

She is giving him the gift of healing and renewal, they seem to be opposites but that is needed for balance~

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/21/2022 11:22:00 AM

Dear Anil - I will not touch this entry with meaningless commentary from me. There is nothing I could add. Please allow me to let this entry stand with your own thoughts and meaning. The only comment from me is that your words speak. Have a wonderful night. Remain safe. Love and Blessings always. Namaste and Shalom (smile)