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She Aims To End His Fun

In dead of night he sneaked around. He thought he was a player. Two steps behind without a sound, she followed her betrayer. And this is not a bb gun. She's gonna curtail all his fun! While he was using girls for sport, she formed a little plan. His foolish games she soon would thwart. Cos' he's a married man! And this is not a bb gun. She's gonna curtail all his fun! She's been out to the firing range. Her aim is tried and true. While he's out getting him some strange, she's thinking it all through. And this is not a bb gun. She's gonna curtail all his fun! So now the time has come to act. He's in a motel lot. She's mad as Hades,that's a fact. She'll give him all she's got! And this is not a bb gun. She's gonna curtail all his fun! Calls out his name,he spins around. With shock he stands and waits. She's aiming low without a sound, as his ego she deflates! And this is not a bb gun. She finally curtailed all his fun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/10/2011 3:40:00 PM
Love the point here and you say it well.
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Date: 6/25/2011 11:06:00 AM
A great write on the feckless behavior of some.
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Date: 5/29/2011 3:06:00 PM
wow! Deb, on the part of it not being a bb gun .. had me with bad vision / of something going down.... poor him... bet deserved i presume... you did an awesome job here,..p.d.
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Date: 5/23/2011 3:19:00 PM
Ouch!!! congratulations on you hm with this gem, Deb. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/23/2011 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations on the Hm win in the contest of paula, Deb
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:13:00 PM
Congrats, Deb. Outstanding entry. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2011 9:53:00 AM
Great poem, Deb. Love the way you describe the gun as not being a "BB." Congratulations on your success in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:48:00 AM
I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Deb. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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